All Comments on 'A Fly on the Wall Ch. 02'

Wonderfully detailed on how they mutually felt during intercourse and plenty of dialogue to make it feel real. Only thing I would say detracted from this was the placement of the "baby" talk, as that could have been a real mood killer for real-life couple; it would have been better for her to talk to him about it before they started their long sex romp. Aside from that, nothing else lacking that I saw.

Very yummy indeed! Thank you!

This was so fun to read erotic everyone wants to have sex with their stepmom

But why didn't he ask her to marry him? This is not an incest story he can legally marry her. It would have been nice to mention how much money him and his friend had made, not just a whisper to Laura. I love genius millionaire stories. Other wise brilliant story Author, so thank you.

What a cute story that was very well written. The ending where ok should have had them getting married. An Epilogue would be nice. At an rate it gets my 5 star vote

Did Gerry’s birth mother die in a boating accident (first story), or while giving birth to him (this story)? You wrote both accounts. Other than that, the only thing missing is chapters 3, 4, and 5!

5 ⭐️, btw…

Sorry, liz33nd, I don't want and never wanted to have sex with my 'stepmom'. She's always been a total bitch, and not that good-looking. My dad's girlfriend before her OTOH...

But that is many decades ago.

Loved both stories, 2x 5*. A follow up or epilogue woulda been nice tho!

5⭐️ story and this needed an epilogue for them having a body or 2, do they stay in the house or move elsewhere and get married

It was a great tale add more chapters as their life progresses