All Comments on 'A Fresh Start Ch. 03'

by Belisana

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SutsarSutsarover 15 years ago
Beautiful

This whole series was absolutely beautiful. Very well written the love between Donna and Gina felt real. I cried when they became wives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Fantastic

Brilliant story, very realistic and "stirring"

keep up the good work xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
WOW

As a lady trucker I wish this was happening to me.

Thanks for the AWESOME story!

Keep up the great work!

darkstone57darkstone57almost 14 years ago
It was great

I read Chapter 1 simply out of curiosity, it looked like a good other side of the street for Trucker stories and you did a fantastic job on both it and chapter 2. But Chapter 3 was the perfect ending, romantic, full of emotion and plenty of sex. I know if i wasn't married to a great guy and i was still dating truckers, i would definitely want to meet someone like Donna.

keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A touch of editing needed?

Sorry to be picky but in Chapter 1 you describe Donna as tall for a woman, 5'10", then in the final chapter you twice describe her as "the little trucker". Perhaps all that hard work with a huge dildo wore her down. Apart from that, a fairly decent story worth five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

i think the litte trucker is the dildo

nero_dantenero_danteabout 7 years ago
Hyperventilating

I freaking loved it short and sweet with a right amount of smut I am quite picky when it comes down to my smut and you managed to balance it.

foxyfowlerfoxyfowleralmost 4 years ago
Brilliant

I have enjoyed reading these stories are you going too write how these two lovers as they travel the country or is this the last story number 3 you are a fantastic writer please write more soon Belisana thank you for the stories. xxxxxxx

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

What a lovely story and yes sometimes it takes patience and luck

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