All Comments on 'A Fresh Start Ch. 03'

by Belisana

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FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyalmost 3 years ago

What a lovely story and yes sometimes it takes patience and luck

foxyfowlerfoxyfowleralmost 4 years ago
Brilliant

I have enjoyed reading these stories are you going too write how these two lovers as they travel the country or is this the last story number 3 you are a fantastic writer please write more soon Belisana thank you for the stories. xxxxxxx

nero_dantenero_danteover 7 years ago
Hyperventilating

I freaking loved it short and sweet with a right amount of smut I am quite picky when it comes down to my smut and you managed to balance it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

i think the litte trucker is the dildo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
A touch of editing needed?

Sorry to be picky but in Chapter 1 you describe Donna as tall for a woman, 5'10", then in the final chapter you twice describe her as "the little trucker". Perhaps all that hard work with a huge dildo wore her down. Apart from that, a fairly decent story worth five stars.

darkstone57darkstone57almost 14 years ago
It was great

I read Chapter 1 simply out of curiosity, it looked like a good other side of the street for Trucker stories and you did a fantastic job on both it and chapter 2. But Chapter 3 was the perfect ending, romantic, full of emotion and plenty of sex. I know if i wasn't married to a great guy and i was still dating truckers, i would definitely want to meet someone like Donna.

keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WOW

As a lady trucker I wish this was happening to me.

Thanks for the AWESOME story!

Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Fantastic

Brilliant story, very realistic and "stirring"

keep up the good work xx

SutsarSutsarover 15 years ago
Beautiful

This whole series was absolutely beautiful. Very well written the love between Donna and Gina felt real. I cried when they became wives.

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