by firsttimer531
Becky and Kim are going to get it on and shithead will be left with nothing. Kind of a stupid story.
I had to stop reading, but I plan to return to finish your story. But please check the spelling and NOT with a spell checker alone because it is very hard to read. So far, I can note that it is a striped shirt, not stripped, it is "What a sight," not site, and weather is what is happening outside, not whether or not you get the girl you want.
Good story
I did return and finished your story. Please continue with your tale as you are weaving a solid erotic story, and I am enjoying the mental images you create. Do watch the spelling, however. Thank you.
Is she tired of cock and wants to do a little carpet munching?
I have had this same problem. The trick is to let them drink a lot of tequila!!! Patron does it for you!
He doesn't need the wife turning into a les, he needs a wife who isn't a selfish frigid bitch.
Ditch the bitch and get a good woman.
Well it's asshats that make such harsh criticisms like several on this story that writters of erotic stories don't write on here anymore. All we get is btb stories now. Who gives a shit if he spelled it weather instead of whether? I was following just fine. Actually I did not even notice. The comments section and rating system is killing this site.