All Comments on 'A Gift Amongst Friends Ch. 02'

Very much enjoying this story - a good build up that makes me want to know how events will pan out for Mandy. It sounds as if she is secretly hoping for increased loss of control and humiliation. If that is the case then I agree with her...

ANOTHER GREAT ENTRY. I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING

Just saw the second chapter and read them both - amazing stories. Hot, alluring, and leaving us wanting more with the cliffhanger at the end of chapter. Looking forward to seeing what happens to Mandy and her would-be watchers.

Please for the love of god continue writing. I loved the first two chapters

Thanks again for the positive feedback! I hope to get a few more chapters out of this story, but I've been pretty busy with work. I'm also hoping the writing will improve as the story progresses. My background is in technical writing, so this is my first attempt at narrative storytelling. I've still got a long way to go, I know!

I love how you are taking your time to get to know the characters in this story. Also the twist with Mandy actually exposing herself in person as well as her intention to let David see her on the camera. I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see how Mandy finds other ways to expose herself.

RecHiker

Love the inner dialog and her inner self pushing her to go farther. Keep it up!!!

Really wanna know how this develops?

What happened with Andrew after this?

Did anyone see Mandy at the window?

What was David's further reaction, to the fall and the pics? Did he include the other friends in the group? Did he hold it over Mandy?

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.......

I remember wearing the towel with my hands occupied, hoping it would fall while also hoping it wouldn't.

Your Mandy character is entrancing. Please show us more of her- - development as a compulsive exhibitionist and reluctant submissive slut (in some circles 'slut' is a good name, such as here on literotica). Goog job.

Oh, my... Chapter two! Thank you for continuing Mandy's story! Now I'm curious about David and Andrew's interaction with Mandy after that unexpected exhibition. Excited for Chapter three!

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