All Comments on 'A Gift Amongst Friends Ch. 07'
by Insufficient
- 16 Comments
Paperdartover 9 years agoA good chapter, glad that you have taken the time to write it Insufficient. I enjoyed the slow pace of all the chapters and mixture of consensual and reluctant exhibitionism. It is a shame that this will be the last chapter but you can certainly pat yourself on the back,
skyicewolfover 9 years agoLast Chapter? D:
Your work is just, so, so wonderful. I want to just lock you in a room and make you write these all the time haha.
Seriously, you have a gift. Hope you keep writing. :)
SexyDaemonover 9 years agoOMG you've returned! For a moment there I thought you were done. Way to surprise me. Nice closing chapter, though it feels like it's left room for more. I guess that's because the real climax (lol) was the last chapter (6).
ssubramaniam122over 9 years agoBut is there anyway to convince you to continue?
5 stars any day.
JonnyLancsover 9 years agoPlease Please Please keep on writing, just found your AGAF and The Concert series and have read them all one straight after the other, 5 stars all the way
Anonymousover 9 years agoI hopr this is not the last chapter but as long as you keep submitting it's all good! A wonderful surprise to see you pop up last night. I waited until tonight to "pop up"myself. Brought my laptop in to work, waited until everyone left and then jerked off all over my boss' desk. With that kind of reaction from your fans, you musn't keep us waiting so long for your next submission. You are THE BEST!!!
Anonymousabout 9 years agoOne of my favorites of all time! Hope you continue with these two girls, it sounds like there's a lot more trouble they could get into...
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI read this story, fascinated. Then I read it again. The entire story from start to finish.
I am speechless. It was wonderful, engrossing, captivating and troubling all at once.
What is it about the humiliation of women, of young women, that so turns us on?
And boy was I turned on. I read half the story on a plane and literally went to the lavatory to masturbate in the middle of the flight.
But I am truly bothered. Who is Mandy? She could be our daughter, sister, neighbor, friend. She could be anyone. How quickly does fantasy become plan, plan become action, action become behavior. How soon does a girl (or anyone for that matter ) slide down the slippery slope.
This story is troubling exactly because of how addictive and titillating it is.
And after all that, compliments to the author for having hit the nail so squarely on the head, for having touched so accurately on such a raw nerve.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE (I'M SORRY I'M BEING VAGUE. I'M NOT GOOD AT EXPRESSING MY TRUE FEELINGS) BTW, MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Anonymousabout 9 years agoIts one of Best story I read here...... Just a suggestion for u that dont let so many people get to know about her.... the less people know the more level of thrill is increased....
Waiting for next chapter or story.
Emjanssover 8 years agothere are so many ways the summer could go, please don't leave that story untold.
Anonymousover 6 years agoMy goodness! That's some incredible climax scenes you've written, Insufficient!! I truly enjoyed them all. My favorite in this chapter was with Mandy and Alex. It finally happened and you did NOT disappoint. He certainly had a lot of control and composure over Mandy. A superb climax, especially with four orgasms as the final outcome from the naughty pair! Well done, Insufficient!! Looking forward to reading your final chapter, the one over the summer. All with eager anticipation and curiosity!
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