All Comments on 'A Gift from Hell Ch. 02: Satana Returns'

by DrSpidey

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praitorianlord11praitorianlord11about 9 years ago
Wicked

Love it; I would recommend that you do at least two more chapters of this. Keep it coming!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
so good

and so sexy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Oh damn!

I got so worked up with this story. Please keep writing on it and I hope something good happens for the happy couple. Satan is a cruel bastard and needs his head checked.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Hey

Please continue this. :)

DrSpideyDrSpideyabout 9 years agoAuthor
Will do.

I'm working on part 3 now.

DarkblazerDarkblazeralmost 9 years ago

Any idea when the 3rd part is done?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great read!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Hate to be that guy but...

Loved the original, but to me, despite what the others have stated, this is a clear-cut example of how NOT to write a literotica. I understand she's a sex demon with an enormous sex drive, I get it and respect that. However as a reader, I have to say you have to much sex sex sex and not enough plot, to the point where this chapter got redundant and very repetitive / annoying. I love the detailed sex scenes as much as anyone but you kept going back to back to back, of course it's going to get old fast, hell you don't even give them time to truly build a relationship by getting to know each other, or rather, letting him get to know more about her since she already knows everything lol... I'm still gonna read the other chapter(s) but for this chapter sorry to say, I just wasn't satisfied, sorry =/

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Pls anon....

This was great.

"tomato, and stood there, shocked by what she was telling me."

So good. Made me chuckle😂

A response to anons comment. Please. This is not how to write literotica? No character development? I like it that it's mysterious. And sex can never be enough, especially with a craving demon! It's good thing to have variety here. I personally, don't like to read 5 pages of nonsense and back stories, events happening just to learn more about them. I read them because it's interesting AND dirty. It's called preference. This has a good balance imho. I hope this author publishes more of this kind. Shame it's only three parts.

P.S. I love big voluptuous figures so that's a big plus in my book.

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