A Girl in Need Ch. 03

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"Has he asked you for a date, and does he have a name?"

"His name is Jake Rogers, and he has asked me to a barbecue at his family's place."

"Well, I had something to do on Monday, anyway, so that will give Sean and you something to do. I must say, when you pick a guy, you really pick one, and I'm really surprised."

"What do you mean?" I asked, only to be laughingly told, "You'll find out on Monday!"

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Hopeful. A dark day and reopened heart wounds, still there is possible bonding rapport that is heartwarming like a kindling light at night. Good luck. Things may get worse before they get better...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Alright.

I had more hope for it in the begining. The writting seems a bit amature. You don't need to put "he said" "she replied" every single time - it gets a bit distracting. The plot is sweet if not a bit obvious. It seems a bit unrealistic at a lot of points. I did give a 4 because dispite all you seem talented. Thank you for sharing!

bruce22bruce22over 13 years ago
Delightful Story

I am addicted to loving wives but this one tastes good to me even without hot sauce..

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