All Comments on 'A Good Night'

Thanks everyone for your comments, I knew tense change would be a massive issue but I really rushed this one. Keep the comments coming!

Nice story, but you keep switching back and forth between present and past tense.

as if fucking your best friend isn't good enough, when she bends over and invites you to take her ass, it's a (wet) dream come true!

good work.

always ruin a story.

I have a friend that I've had a similar experience with. One of the best times of my life. Keep it up!