All Comments on 'A Good Wife Shouldn't Cheat'

That did not develop as I thought it was - so good job you great writer(s) you! Y'all spoofed me.

I think those sequences with both women in the bed with hubby were some of the hottest and sexiest I've read in a LONG time. And I wasn't looking for this to be a sexy story.

One of these days I'm going to finish another story, don't hold your breath though, it won't be this good.

All he did was turn her rationals back on her. Can't imagine it happening at the end like this in the real world, but, man, if it could... Signed: BTW

Stupid ! If you going to end someone else's story don't make it so stupid!

Drunk one time if you would have been here

Good morning

Still, she often thinks about Sam's big prick giving her the best fuck of her life. I doubt she is too remorseful, and will go a hunting sooner rather than later.

But he's a douche. Should have just divorced. She's gonna end up hating him and he's just going to keep trying to justify her one night with his ongoing bullshit. It'll end in suicide or murder or both. Hopefully just in a divorce that should have happened anyways. Where I started off on his side by the end I was thoroughly convinced that he didn't deserve her. And not on some cuck shit but her remorse is far greater than his. Her love for him exceeds his. He didn't want her rubbing her infidelity in his nose but it's fine fr him to not only flaunt his but expect her to accept and go along with it. He's a piece of shit. Justify it however you need but he's trash

Someone finally got me to side with the cheating woman. Couldn't imagine a story that I didn't want to BTB. She made a drunken mistake and paid her dues. I would have been OK with her taking shit for some time while trying to make it up to her family. This ending had me trying to think up the ways she could "win". Get the kids on her side, get legal advice and maybe burn Marty, revenge on the home wrecker from across the street. The house would already be legally half hers and enough has happened here to more than offset her actions to the court system.

Really fucked up story.

Imagine if it was real, someone is going to get seriously hurt and the entire family kids and all will be blown to kingdom come.

And, you know what?

Each of them deserves the pain that is coming.

Write another chapter about that.

Read the original, so came back to this one. I like the.punishment for Sam, but she got off too easy. The poly ending sucked.

Husband will not allow his kids to see him raise another man’s child but subject them to him committing adultery permanently and forcing his wife to chose either to remain in a ménage or leave? And the other woman telling the wife she will allow the wife to remain in the house? Ridiculous result legally morally and ethically. No way what the wife did made her deserve this. Fucking the other woman while the wife was away was ok but forcing the wife to be in a 3 way is outrageous.

Beginning had promise, but the 3-some ending was pure crap

Really crappy. Husband should be the one in jail. She is really a stupid woman. Hate what FTDS did to this story.

So much for never drinking again. The sex was incredible. The Bear hesitatingly approves. Maybe he'll have a heart attack .Unreal.

The BEAR

first time i hated your stories i could not believe you made him worse than her, and to top it off the worry about the kids. you just gave them more bs to deal with.

You had a good story, until you moved Maria in.

Disappointment.🤔

She chose not to have an abortion, knowing he wouldn't let her stay in the house. If she didn't figure something might happen with another woman the she was delusional. Her husband said she was smart, but a smart person would have gone with the abortion.

I usually really enjoy your stories but this one was a dumpster fire!

I love this story! The sex at the end was hot. I mean really hot! But the whole story arc was a good one. I could damn near see it happening in real life.

Not my cup of tea.

Dumb story

One of the rare times someone had the balls to write a story where a cheating wife got her proper comeuppance.

Not for me. This is so far out it’s dumb.

much greater payback......

not for fucking sam...

but,

for giving birth to sam's basterd child.....using husband's love, finances and mental turmoil...as granted

Now this is what I call a great ending to an unfinished story, no matter how twisted it is. Well done, FinishTheDamnStory, it is great to see that someone actually takes the time to finish these unfinished stories and even how you continued it this story needs more.

I find so many authors here on Literotica that leave their stories unfinished and leave you hanging. FinishTheDamnStory if you read this there are alot of unfinished stories on Literotica that need finishing, you have a great imagination and do a great job. Well Done FinishTheDamnStory 5 stars

Yes it is evil, but the story was great, fabulous in fact. I like both women, but I’d drop Marty into the deepest part of the Ocean without a second thought. What a slimey little creep.

Scores 5/5.

On top of a story devolving to a dumb fuck and suck fantasy of a teenager.

With every main character in the story being abhorrent, there's no one to like or resonate with.

I always appreciate your writing. You're very creative and almost always go in a direction I didn't expect but very much enjoy. I know some feel the ending is unrealistic but this is fiction is it not? I love how Jackie stuffers consequences for her decisions but there is redemption as well. A+

If I were her, I would of turned around with my bags, put them in my car and driven to the nearest divorce lawyer and filed for divorce.

This was ridiculous. The original story's conclusion was a much better ending.

Unlined the ending but then I'm Poly so yeah.

Wimp should have divorced her when she decided the loved her boyfriends baby more than him .

Pathetic .

Alot of bullshit especially the other woman and all the lesbian shit. Story was ok until she finally returns home. Then it went downhill fast.

Damn. The fucking meltdown at Chernobyl ain't got nothing on this hot story! Absolutely sexy. You checked all the right boxes and the thing that did it was the wife's whole mental dialogue. Killer storytelling. 5/5 and then some!

No. Just no. Is this supposed to be serious? I’m not sure which of the 4 MCs are more morally reprehensible.

Fucked up....NOT WORTH READING

1 star - I could not get past the first page - this is just not my kind of story.

Garbage

That was one fucked up story. I loved it .. Strange but that type of shit happens. Normally the wife with 2 mem lol.

I think he was a right Bastard moving his lover in.

Yes, she screwed up royally, but he WAS partially to blame. Knowing she couldn’t hold her liquor & passing out with that shit head in his house made him culpable in her affair.

She screwed up once & he moves his lover into her house? A proper total asshole

Then deliberately getting her drunk so as to accept his cuckholding her? Really an ass.

Boo! I’m being generous with 2 stars.

Bill

This was one of your more seriously fucked up endings.

R I D I C U L O U S!!!

Most stupid ending. Must 've taken the "writer" a few kilos of powder to "cum" out with so much poo!!!

This was the worst story I've read at this site. I'm happy that I did not waste my time reading Pages 4 and 5.

nuts! you lost me when Marty said "Please leave." Think I read this once before, but never again.

I wasn't going to comment, but so many of you are bitching about this one. I don't want to hear the "he's culpable" crap. She was to blame, and... she was STILL having pleasant daydreams about how satisfying old Sam's cock was- best ever UNTIL she took a ride with Marie and Marty.

Don't forget, she just dropped off a little package that might reappear in their lives, say 18 years down the road to remind Marty just what a good wife she was. If this situation is what it takes for Marty to be happy, then she can accept the thing that she put in motion or skip on down the road.

And snowflakes - this is Lit, him getting two women at once gave me a boner, as it should. *****

I was reading the comments and saw I commented a few months ago. I don’t remember reading this before, but it looks like I did.

Funny but I rated it two stars just like before.

Moving a mistress in is no way equivalent to a one time fuck.

Bill

Another hypocritical, self-righteous adolescent of a husband… and a wife who was never gay suddenly going along with gay sex? And permitting her hypocritical hubby (who did far worse than she did) to bring a co-wife into their marriage? Nope.

Started out decent. Then began to devolve. The ending was farcical.

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1 *

Honestly, i don't blame him for getting a lover. His wife carrying another man's child must be a hell of a mind-fuck, knowing that from now on there's a child of her's out there that he had no part in making. The threesome is probably the only way they would or could have stayed together. The other woman has kind of become the buffer for his continued hurt at his wife's betrayal. Obviously it only worked because there's probably something wonky going on with the wife as well. I don't think guilt alone would allow her to accept the future situation otherwise.

"Sally Tart shows us the collapse of a marriage" - Actually, she DIDN'T show us the collapse of a marriage, at lest as of the end of the story.

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"I knew the right thing to do for my family was to have an abortion, but I didn't believe in them." - Do you believe in infidelity?

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He can't stop her from seeing the kids, though if she forces the issue she might kill any chance for a reconciliation.

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"I didn't blame Sam." - Why not? He got you drunk, took advantage of you.

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"I shouldn't care if he ever used that great big gorgeous cock again. Although it would be a shame." - Is she insane?

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"Trying to get her claws in my man. The bitch." - Maybe you should have gotten the abortion!

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"Twenty years for giving me the best sex of my life. Poor bastard." - "Poor bastard?"

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After all her using being drunk as an excuse, she's got no business sneering when Marie did the same.

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"her fake breasts pressed against my overly sensitive, milk laden real ones." - I was expecting her to express some milk when they pulled on her nipples.

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"Let me come, Jackie, Please." - Isn't an orgasm a physiological reaction? How can she stop herself from coming if the stimulation is there?

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I've seen this before, where a wife cheats, gets pregnant, then suddenly decides to take a moral stand on abortion. You don't believe in abortion? Don't have unprotected sex with a man not your husband!

Wow! I can’t think of a better way, to get back at a cheating, unrepentant slut! Let’s see how her ego( and stretch marks) does against a younger, and hotter woman. You made your bed Bitch, lie in it! Gave it a 5, wanted to give it a 10!

When a drunk girl says no to having sex but the guy still fucks her (without a condom) that is rape. She should have gotten an abortion. Her husband would never except the kid as his! It mother would still want to maintain contact. He should have just divorced her when she stated that she would carry the baby to term!

I was really liking the story, then the ending was a big ole, "yeah...whatever."

She ahould have abortes the kid of she claimed she lobed her husband and family as much as she said. A good wife does not screw around

Great story, I was surprised by the ending.

Absolutely horrible ending to this story- what a total hypocrite the husband became, showing me that hypocrisy resides in the mind of the author. One night's terrible mistake, the result of too much alcohol on her part and the husbands, and she suffers for it tremendously; in large part because of the unforgiving and vengeful jerk she married. NOW, cheating is fine, because the sex between the 3 of them is good. What a crock. This gets my first score of a 1 of all the stories I've read.

Stupid ending.

Abysmal concoction. Gave 1 star.

He turned into the biggest hypocrite for miles around...basically using his "weakness" with alcohol to be able to use two women whose lives were already messed up.

And the same old problem for all of them..way too much familiarity with the contents of wine bottles on too many critical occasions in their lives.

I rarely give bad criticism. If I don't like a story I just move on. I enjoyed the concept and the beginning but was wondering where you were going to take it. A more plausible ending would be with Sam not going to prison and making another move on Jackie and then you decide what you want. Or Sam finding out about the baby. This was no so realistic. But original

You mentioned at the beginning about coming up with a story for the kids. This is what you thought was interesting or realistic? Those kids are screwed up for life. What a crock of shit. I'd give it a zero if I could.

ONCE AGAIN...Someone needs to: FINISH THE DAMN STORY. Because certainly did not. LP

I did, I loved it. Wow, five (5 *) stars.

And now that I gave my rating, one more comment. Finish the Damn Story! What happened next to this multifaceted family group?

There is no finish to this story. He is sterile so there is no more kids. He has learn quick how to service two women. You start with a little wine, preferably, a rested cock, an a playground big enough for three. These two women are young enough, and certainly hot enough, but one of them may demand exclusive rights. I don't think either will give up without a fight, so if he plays his cards right, the girls will make the rules for both time alone with him, and three ways, but I don't think either one will give him up. The kids love him, so he'll be a great dad. When it's an empty nest, and menopause has past for Momma, and just starting for Marie, there may be a problem, then again there may not. By then the women may have decided that neither will give him up to the other, so a form of harmony will develop, and they will be buried as a family. Good job. Watch your editing. Keep writing.

XYZ

a complete waste of an hour & 10 minutes.

People saying she should of had an abortion maybe she lived in a state where it’s now illegal if she lives in America did her husband think of that maybe he was already cheating an he planned it to make abortion the only option open to her in the hopes she would be in prison an wouldn’t uncover his betrayal. The poor kids involved in this toxicity. An I actually feel for the wife she’s had to give her baby up which is hard for anyone an now be told to accept her husbands other women I’d be surprised if she didn’t have some sort of mental breakdown her husband is the worst hypocritical arsehole I’ve ever read about an the worse husband ever

One of tne best! Pay no heed to the previous comments, they are obviously homos and man haters. This story was awesome, how these idiots can have their delusional opinions well there are to many i this world, Listen her cheating was all deception, lies, and about belittling him, plus the pregnancy as a constant reminder. His cheating was about healing, passion, inclusion, which he wanted to share and LOVE! How any of you goofs can even compare the two acts or say he's a bad guy is idiotic and shows how sad and hateful you are towards men. 5STARS!!!!

Dumb question: What's a "BTB" story?

Such a waste of time. She cheated and he should of divorced her and moved on but this crap of trying to have 2 wives is such a load of shit.

Interesting story, a completely different perspective.

He gave her more options then I would, er... the the story I wrote, er.. will write someday, maybe...

I just have to say though, I kind of wish we could comment on some of the commenters.

@waltdee

BTB = Burn The Bitch/Bastard who's cheating. Term to describe all the revenge-on-cheater stories.

The term for the opposite extreme is RAAC = Reconciliation At Any Cost stories, which are often derided as wimpy. The term is overused; some of those stories are nice & nuanced, with atonement and eventual forgiveness, not cheap pushover surrender.

Outside of that spectrum are the happy swap stories, the happy group sex stories, and the cuckold fetish stories

3 stars, mainly for the story UNTIL the wife returns to find another woman living in her house with her husband - & will continue to do so. Understandable he doesn't want to raise another guy's baby - hell, I wouldn't either -but after childbirth, he didn't want her returning to his house? Moreover, why did the other woman sell her house? Somehow outrageous & unbelievable doesn't seem to cover things. And spoils what could've been a nice story.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Complete over-the-top fantasy! Iloved it. Thanks for writing.

Should have divorced the whore when she refused to abort the love of her life's baby

Only 3 for putting the efforts in making the conclusion but sorry to say, it felt even worst to me than the original story specially after Jackie's coming back to home. Your story is a self contradictory.

Storie but it is so screwed. Just not from this author.

WTF...LOL....THE SLUT WIFE IS WITH THE MISTRESS

The moment he & the neighbor fucked he was in the exact place she was. Got drunk and fucked someone who wasn’t his wife / husband.

At that point she should have made her case to him. She had a baby, but he kept his lover. That made him much worse than she.

That should have been the end of the story.

Then he & the other woman got her drunk to entice her into accepting the bitch as a second wife.

Bill S.

Ruined it with the husband cheating, I'd have choked her out and beat his ass.

Basically a stupid story that makes zero sense and really who cares about stupid characters no matter how much stupid shit they do 🙄🙄🙄

amusing. I wonder if a wife would do this after cheating? She cheats, gets the best sex ever and he gets a live in 3 some... If before I read this you would have summarized the story this way I would have skipped it. But after she, even carrying another man child, fantasized about the big cock, I think she needs this situation to remain faithful. I think the husband deserves the 3 some and the invaders kid certainly will benefit. It will be interesting how much disdain the neighbors and family will inflict...

Husband cheated when he was drunk, but invited "girlfriend" to move in when he was sober. Wife should dump him and get on with her life.

The story became absolutely stupid when Marty, the husband was such strong views about adultery, decided to move Marie into his home as a concubine. It might have been tolerable for him and Marie to have a one-time tryst, but moving her into the home made everything else in the story ridiculous. The basis of the story was the wife causing shame by carrying Sam's baby. Her shame and the impact on the children was dwarfed by Marty and Marie's behavior. The story went from a cautionary tale about mistakes having consequences to an absolute absurdity.

Really entertaining 5*

The author ruined a good story. It should have ended with a remorseful wife returning to her family after a forced nine month absence from her children and having been humiliated in front of her own parents. Then she has to prove her love for her husband. Of course both would never touch alcohol again since neither have a tolerance for it not self control. Instead the story collapsed into a ridiculous 3some with a divorced neighbor who was foolish enough to sell her own house.

Trailer park white trash should have had the abortion if she really wanted her husband and family!! Screwed up a story with the skank carrying the bastard to term and the third butch in their bed!!

STUPID AUTHOR

This is a disappointing submission by FTDS. The preface to the story centered on the fact the couple's two teenagers were ignored in the original story. Marty refused to allow the children to see their mother while she was carrying Sam's baby because of the damage knowledge of her pregnancy would do to them. When the divorced llady from across the street moved into the house pregnant with their half sibling, the impact on the three children suddenly living in the home was several orders of magnitude greater than what knowledge of the wife's bastard pregnancy would have been. Interestingly, FTDS made no further mention of the children or their welfare once the neighbor's pregnancy was revealed. The kevek of hypocrisy evident here is both embarrassing and infuriating to contemplate. Among all of the ludicrous details of this farcical conclusion, the shattered and worthless remains of FTDS' integrity are easy to overlook.

First EVER LW story where the normal cock sized husband outfucks the giant cocked lover and delivers the better fucking to the slut wife………..delivering the legendary ‘little death orgasm’ to the slut wife……..out orgasming even the fucking Sam gave her. R. H.

Look, when you got a slut wife you had best find something younger, hotter and tighter as fast as possible…..only good way out. R. H.

To the anonymous that posted about a half sibling, you need to read properly, Marie had her own kid, and Marty had a vasectomy, so he can't get her pregnant. She had Tommy already, hence why Jackie asked about him. But at the end of the day, husband ain't better than the wife, he continued his affair, whereas she stopped hers, of course, it was due to pregnancy that she had to say something. But it doesn't make what he did any better and he should have realized that after the first night.

Pure faggotry

Disappointed. Children still were left out.

The husband was an ass. She gives up her baby to come home to Marie and is asked to go on as three. The discussion in the end, while having sex. Seriously!

Terrible story that started well but fell apart with Marie.

All one can say is that story is God's proof of why abortion should be allowed and even encouraged in some situations. Wife has no one to blame but herself for choosing her silly anti-abortion beliefs over the well-being of the family.

Quelle merde!!! Il faut vraiment avoir l'esprit tordu pour accepter ce genre de choses et surtout les écrire. L'auteur devrait aller consulter avec cette histoire. Elle accepte d'abandonner son enfant et lui vient introduire une salope dans leur couple. Quelle tristesse. Et les enfants, bel exemple pour eux. Je n'ai plus de mots tellement je suis écoeuré.👿

no fue el mejor esfuerzo chicos, pero igual se agradece!

A new twist! She cheated and ended up "paying" a price she never imagined. Great twist!

Bloody good, imaginative end, well done.

I don't know what happened. I gave up on page 3 when it got stupid.

I'd like to give this story 4 stars, but can't. It was well written & thought out, as this writer's stories are. However, once Marie came into the picture- moreso when Marie sold her home & started living with them. It's also fucked up, as Marty's wife said- he's so concerned with the kids seeing their mother pregnant (understandable) from her cheating, but not that worried about them seeing him with 2 women (just messed up!). Yes, his wife made a huge mistake & could've been a marriage ending thing. But Marty wanted to stay married to her, so there should not be room for a 2nd woman.

Marie & Marty only had sex once? So that's why she sold her house? Doesn't compute. This all spoils what could've been a very good, if sad or uplifting (depending if there'd be a divorce or not; also what she had to go through during her pregnancy) story.

The author didn't like the original & won't write stories- thankfully - with cuck'd men, BUT he/she comes off making the husband into a bastard. As such, 3 stars Bob

The fact that women don't and maybe can't comprehend is cheating hurts men on a much deeper level! Throughout the ages the best odds of ensuring paternity for men has always been fidelity, and though it garnered the best chance your genes being passed on it is not a guarantee- hence the extremely high value of virginity and fidelity to men, this is why the painful emotions are felt so extreme by men. Not having any biological need for women to ever have to question paternity they don't feel these deep seated emotional reactions, and not only do women not have them but they believe men only feel the same emotions as they would, with no comprehension of how much deeper it wounds men.