All Comments on 'A GOR-y Halloween Party'

One of my favorite stories on Lit. I Really hope we get a sequel; something from their first Christmas together, maybe? Perhaps some special packages contents used under the tree? Imagine a double-double dildo that Jack controls while both girls are mounted on it. Yummy!

I read this two story series a number of times. I love it and never get tired of it.

Love it, where is the ne t part?

You need to share what happens when they get home.

Wow wish I could attend a party like that. Another chapter please. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Excellent, although it needs at least one more chapter.

Continue this story, please

Brilliant story. Thank you for sharing your talent and vision. Please do a follow up. This needs to be written. I wish I could rate it higher than 5 stars. BardnotBard.

A follow-up story? Stories??? Please!

Multi-protagonists. Sometimes a few too many but on the other hand maybe not. I love it!

This was almost too intense. I had to regulate my reading to a few hours at a time & wear a condom to keep from getting too sore. Due to a medication that I’m taking, I can’t have an orgasm but I can last for hours. It’s a curse. My wife lost all desire for sex 15 years ago so I can talk her into blowing me rarely.

Life when you’re old sux.

Bill S.

This was fantastic!! Someday I hope you write a follow up chapter where we get to see Jack spend a couple days with Amanda and Teri plus the four coed slaves could come visit. Beth definitely needs to come over and the other three didn’t get to fully submit to their master. We didn’t even get to see the blonde one at all. Even if you decide not to revisit this story I hope you’ll consider writing another gor related story as you do it so well!

Your pseudonym is well-chosen.

Also, OMG

Better than the first part...Are there any more? Please

This has to be one of my favorite all time stories. I am sure I am not alone in asking the author for a sequel.

Probably one of the greatest stories on Literotica. Deserves a sequel.

I'm Still looking forward to a sequel/continuation of this story. I reread it again and enjoyed it for maybe the fourth time, now. I'd really like to see how their lives progress.

This is an awesome story line.

read it 3 times and would love to see it continue

This story ain't finished yet...

Words fail, again the second time around

I had not thought of the Gor novels in years. Thoroughly enjoyed re-reading this. A very good modern use of the Gor fantasy universe.

I think your take on the GORean aspect was great. I wish there was more on the site about it.

Needs to continue with more chapters.

So amazing - it does everything right, and pushes all of my buttons! It even feels realistic, with the beating and the ending. The only problem is that, when it's this good, it spoils me for anything else...

Where could this go from here? Or should I say this should never end? Seriously, entire novels could be written about the future of the relationships that were developed in the initial story. A bigger than average cock, paired with pheromones that must be over active etc,etc, make him a a man in need of a following. More please, enjoyed this tremendously!

I like the way it was written. I like all the characters and the descriptions of the characters and the sexual situations. I also like the happy ending!

I love this story. I’ve read a bunch of your stories and the other one that pops up is the football one. Makes me wanna make more effort into watching football with my hubby. Keep it up and thank you!

Loved this story.

Keep up the great work!

Very well written. I enjoyed the story immensely.

Had to come back to reread this yet again. Halloween is coming, after all. It still holds up.

Loved the gor books and will have to do some research as you gave me some ideas. I also would love to see more of the story.

I’ve been reading on literotica for the better part of 20 years. This is by far the best story I’ve read. Very well thought out and written.

Incredible storyline,well written and planned. Would love more follow up

I’ve read a ton of stories on this site and I have to say this story is by FAR the best one I have read. Your others (that I’ve read so far) are fantastic as well. But this one is in a class by itself. The character development was amazing and it allowed me to feel the emotions from all the participants as the story unfolded. I’d love to see more to this and see how their lives unfold after the party as what happened at that party would have changed a number of lives as well as relationships. Some for the better but some for the worse. Please if you do come back and continue consider following this story further.

Excellent story. Would be nice for third part in the series, where Alice brings Greg over to apologize, a few weeks later, to Amanda sincerely. Then Master, Amanda and Teri help her with a plan to retrain him over the three day weekend. Make a complete transformation, even servicing all Masters needs if directed.

I read all those books about Gor when I was in my formative (and horny) teens. You captured a lot of it very well!

Good job

I could believe it happening in Dallas!!

You gave a clear hint of just how wild the woman inside Amanda was in the practice runs with the costumes, both her and Teri, but I love how these two are the only two not to have been fucked by their or any other Master through the entire night.

For Amanda, the entire night was a form of training, as Jack shows her what being a Gor slave means through his use of the other slaves. You were right to have Amanda join Jack toward the end and help him fuck the others.

I would love to see the next story, with Jack using Amanda and Teri back at their home. But then I would really love to see how things develop with Beth and Alice (assuming Greg either doesn't fund out or realises he is hopeless to stop her) becoming more regular slut slaves for Jack and his two main women.

Erika and Denise could naturally pop in occasionally because I loved their submission to Jack.

Please come and finish all your stories... You have a gift man

It's why I come here. This is one of the best cuckold stories ever.

Silly, hot, and wonderful. I'd love a sequel!

I sincerely wish I could score it with another 5. Of course I can't, that's what I gave it the first time I read it.

I have read a lot of stories on Lit but few are as memorable as this one. It's as sexy as hell, but more than that it's well written - grammatically and stylistically. The use of language is excellent - no points where you wonder why you used a word totally out of line with the tone of the piece, and it's consistent.

I just love this story.

Having read the Gor saga (I still have many 1st edition paperbacks) I was delighted to read these chapters leading up to and through the party. I enjoyed every scene and did not anticipate the final chapters. I wish there would have been a follow-up story to continue the saga. Thanks.

This is by far the best story that I have read on this site. In-fucking-credible! Wished I could have been there. The scenario was great, and the sex was stupendous. I loved it! One of my favorites.

Fantasy I love, Fiction I know what it is.. I do know I couldn't last if it were true and I had to 'Man' up to it. All I can do is Wish it was true and I was one of the guests. I know you've been out of action for some time, but I'll keep looking for your excellent writing. I loved the idea of the different colors of silk, and thanks for giving the meaning of them. I loved the reaction when the 'safeword' was not honored. I fell right into your character then. My love life is like your character in the beginning, but my wife won't even accept foreplay and oral is not even allowed to be mentioned. My life goes on thru stories like yours. My dry spell has been about 40 years. Keep up the stories, as I keep returning to your 'line'.

This site is about fiction and fantasy, so this is great. Give us more, and include the tough discussions to come. Our protaginist needs some rules about when he can have other slaves around...and Amanda needs the right to serve others masters. Also discuss a new safe word; this important item gets left out too many times.

But the entire time I was really hoping Wendy and Sheila would get involved. Especially Sheila. Draenei are my most lusted-after WoW race, and I know for a fact that's a pretty common opinion

I really liked this work of fiction. It is hard to imagine this happening in real life, but your writing certainly brought the story to life. Thank you.

The descriptions of the events create the visions in the readers mind like every story should but often fails. Eleven pages is a lot of writing! I am fascinated by the D/s genre. I hope you have a follow up to this story in the future. This would be 6 stars if possible!

Well written story, complete fiction I can't see this happening in real life. Sorry only one star.

Really liked it, didn't care for the violence, understood it, but a bit much, liked all of the women especially Marie.

Read a lot of stories on this site and this one has to be my most favorite. Was really happy it was 11 pages. A next chapter would be amazing for those planned weekends they set up.

I know it's not likely we will get another chapter after this long, but a man can dream.

thank you, I could easily relate to this problem of a marriage going stale over time.

loved the action and I would love to read more of how they work out their problems.

...thanks for reminding me. Great story with plenty of good characters, a solid plot and enjoyable sex. I may have to dig through my boxes of old books in the attic to see if I kept any of those GOR books. I wonder how different they'll seem thirty years later.

Thanks for taking the time to write and share this story.

Regards,

JD

A fun story to cover what was really an excuse for an orgy.

I much doubt this would happen in real life.

Only one star sorry.

Every guys dream would love to hear how you and Troy work it out with your lovely slave girls. Give us more.....

great story, you seemed to rush the very last part with the girl being tied up. Don't worry about your stories going long you are a good writer. Tell your stories and finish this one. Alice, Amanda Teri so much more ot tell.

5* finish it

Anyone who finds this realistic, is just lying to a bunch of strangers...... Still a fun read and well written.....

Please, please, please write a continuation of this. This has been my favorite story for years and it's the one I keep coming back to. I'd love to read a continuation of all the plots you've teased in this one.

I have been using this site for over a year now and this is by the far the best piece I have ever read. Forget the creativity and sexuality of it all, this was incredibly well written and paced. Beyond that, the incredibly erogenous scenes depicted in this story are so well developed and explained. I can't help but think every story from this point forward will disappoint. I think you could easily keep this story going with at least one more edition if not more. I'd be happy to hear how things go with the newly sexual Amanda and his first time with Teri would surely be worth the price of admission. And who else from the party would he keep his promises to? Once again, incredibly well done.

Definitely need at least a 3rd and 4th story!!

That was an amazing story

Thank you for your wonderful story, i have read the gorean books, and i find your introduction and explanations of what gor is to be very interesting. The fact that you mentioned sl gor and the following of john normans books that has been created there is rather interesting. ignore any comments that say your stories are to long, or to "fantasy" i found this to be surprisingly realistic and actually reflective of what very well may have happened had the gorean culture and "fantasy" actually been real. WTG and a great, great story.

A wonderful idea, a very good starting ... but the rest is too much incredible, an adolescent's dream like.

All those girls and women so willing ...

Moreover, too long until it becomes boring.

Sorry, not more than 3 stars for the whole, perhaps 4 for the idea more than for the novel

I really enjoyed reading the story and the idea of a wife auction. My preference is for wife stories with other men so this was great. I was cheering for Greg to somehow get to have Amanda, it would be hard but she would reluctantly have to admit to herself she liked it. She still hates the guy but he manages to get her off. I always seem to pull for the bad guy! :)

This one is so hot, it screams for a continuation.

How about taching Beth the Wonders of the Anal Play Box?

Pretty Please.....

What happens after the party with Amanda & Teri. Do any of the other ladies remain active with Amanda and hubby?

I really am curious how he will sort out things at home (including making Teri a permanent "feature"), and how he will manage bis slave harem in the future (though this might be a fourth chapter).

Anyway a really great story!

Loved both chapters and looking forward to the next.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading these two chapters and I'm looking for the next one. Done comments regarding losing track of who you were referring to were well founded. However this was but a minor bump in the road. Keep it coming.

By Garr you are one of my favorite authors

Tony

On the first page, and page 8:

Who's - Whose

Meh, another protagonist all too willing to share the women he's with, him sharing his wife, and the mention of her giving oral sex after the rape attempt was a big turnoff for me, that's when he should have been the most possessive and kept her from other men, not have her reward someone that failed to do anything to help protect her.

Aside from the frequent mentions of sharing with other men, the scenes themselves were pretty hot, though the unfamiliar Gor expression was a bit of a distraction, would probably have enjoyed that part more if I had read, and were a fan of the books.

Also Greg got off way too easily, he was a few seconds away from completing the rape.

They should have thrown him out, but asked Alice to stay. And in the future only invited Alice to their shindigs, or if Greg is invited, with the caveat he's never allowed to drink a single drop of alcohol.

Though mastering Alice was a nice touch to get back at him in a more subtle manner.

No loving wife in this shit.

You really have outdone yourself with this one. I can't believe I've been reading your stories so long and somehow missed it!

A very enjoyable read

This is the best I've read.....and I've read way too many. This story really deserves several more chapters.

A worthy sequel. I got lost a few times with so many slaves - I hoped for a few costume and appearance reminders with their first names - but that's small fry. A large cast of intriguing characters with some dimension, lots of hot sex and a fun and nostalgic take on Gor. I wondered how you going to end it and you pulled it off with style and in character: it was the right decision for both Jack and the story.

I have been Lit member for a long time and have made my own donation of a few stories time to time. My own efforts have been humbled by your Halloween Tale.

I read through start to finish and as with all the other comments I observed here I think it would be nearly a criminal offence to not continue to build on the theme you have presented here. Of the hundreds of great ones I have read here Yours is over the top. Keep the tale going and thanks for a truly great read.

you can't leave it there ... this was to good to end there

It's just too good to not continue.

As I said in my comment for the first chapter; A true "tour- de-force," Zorch !!! The best group sex story i've ever read ! (and i've read a lot of them)

Loved your stories and would love them to continue into the non-Halloween future they hinted at the end of the story. I have also read into the high teens of the Gor series, great series although John Norman did seem to be getting a bit carried away with the psychological 'women all desire to be slaves' and left the stories behind. By the way I liked the books so much my first daughter is named Talena..

Love the way that those who are jerks don't get away with it in your stories. The respect your main characters have is a lovely addition to a well written erotic story.

It's like that moment in school when your names in the book haha! Incredible writing - I've enjoyed lots of your stories Tx. Xx

I enjoy alot of your work, but this is your best yet, hands down, no comparison. I hope you follow up on it some day soon.

I loved the GOR books. The 50+ page submission of a slave stuff started to wear on me. The sex and the action was great though.

Very well written story. No cheating, long drawn out revenge, funny (dick in the coed jar, lol) had me rolling, great detail, amazing sex. Good "clean" adult fun. It had everything good and nothing bad. You are one of only a handful that I would actually spend my hard earned cash to read.

I was thinking that this was a story about a bunch of people who just had too much time on their hands. It made this old country boy amazed (and not in a good way, just because I am from the country does not mean that I am green, LOL). I hope that I am never too involved in the ways of the idle rich so I will need to entertain myself with all the fal-de-rol mentioned in this story. This does not mean that it was not an entertaining story, though. Just not a favorite theme, too complicated for me.

Thought the next GOR Haloween story might be forthcoming. ??

Exceptional story. It was the full fantasy. Looking forward to read your other work.

Fantastic story! Had my cock hard the whole time! The level of detail had me at the party living it in my mind.. many thanks

Great story. Thanks for sharing. A great read.

This was an amazing story. Long descriptive sex scenes and most of all very hot visualizations! I would have loved to keep on reading for another dozen pages there at the end.

I hope you will be following this up with another part, because I'm very curious about the aftermath of this party.

You have a lot better parties in your neck of the woods than we do. That's for sure. Loved the GOR references, I remember reading some of those books back in college. Thanks for another great story.

I read the Gor books when I was a teenager and they were juvenile fantasy fodder for my friends and I. It would never have crossed my mind to use them in my adult life.... Until now!

Please continue this series

(This is my first ever comment on a story here but I really wanted to add my voice to all the others who love these stories.)

Yet another sensational read!!! I swear you stories are custom made for my kind of kink!!! This one especially with the GOR slave thing, and the wife sharing... Incredible!!! Again would like to see a bit more mfm action but Amazing all the same. Especially when Mandy "opens up" to new experiences.

Thanks! On to another Story!

JM

garbage can content

More Please.

One of your best. Still waiting for the 2013 chapter. I need more of this!

An incredible eye opener, I'd never even considered domination, submission roles in sex before. Please write more, much more.

And I mean NOBODY, writes as well as you do! Every one of your stories are just sensational!!! I wish I knew where to buy them (please tell me you aren't giving away all of your incredible talent for free!!!) Every TTT story is a guaranteed 5-stars read!

The best part of any Gor novel was the artwork by Boris Vallejo on the cover. It's funny to think that an entire "master/slave" subculture has sprung up from a bunch of pulp Sci-Fi novels from the '60s and '70s. Granted there's the whole 'Trek subculture going on with conventions, but John Norman just wasn't that great of a writer.