All Comments on 'A Helping Hand'

You did a very good job for your first story. I assume that English is probably not your native tongue. The only thing I could see that you might improve on at all was the lead up to the sex. This can be as exciting as the actual in and outs. The taking off of a woman's clothes, a piece at a time, and a lover's too, can be very exciting. coming inside another man's wife can be a turn on for some readers too rather than a titty shot or pullout. Also, the aftermath would have been nice if the return someday in the future wouls have resulted in another coupling of the couple.

This story is another adaptation of the old one. "If you snooze, you lose".

Her husband was drunk and passed out and you were fucking her. You should have left a seed in her, so that in a few months her tummy would have begun swelling. Her husband would have never known that he did not do that.

Nothing extra special but nice enough that I enjoyed it.

Smoking = 1*

Sorry, but I feel NO tension in the 'seduction' aspect of this story. Did Sweetie basically plan to give him some sex as a 'thanks' for helping her steer Hubby back to their place? Or is she the town nympho? Because he certainly did nothing to EARN her panties coming off!

2.7=3*

The lady needed a man and she got a man who gave her the sex she desired. I agree with don87654 that you should have kept your penis inside her and ejaculated if she was using protection it would be fine if not she could get a morning after pill or let nature decide if she is to become pregnant. Its the womans choice really to who and when she has children with. Im am currently on contraception and enjoys the pleasure of a man orgasming inside me and when i decide i will stop contraception and let nature take over. Have fun always Lucy xo.