by submisstomydarkside
Really well written. Good description of the erotica and emotions. I almost thought that these people had met before, or were a couple, out on a "date night"
I think you could have made the scenes longer. It was a good read, I was expecting more bdsm.
Love the discription of the buildup.
So many places to take this story.
I'm not sure what you have in mind, but mine is wandering wildly.
Did she show up for torture?
Did he?
Did he bring toys?
Really enjoyed this.