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All Comments on 'A House to Themselves'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
grammar

It is a good story but would be more enjoyable with correct grammar and punctuated in a way that clearly states what the writer is trying to say.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Could have been a contender

Good ideas, but constantly tripping over repeated words and weird phrases isn't sexy.

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