All Comments on 'A Job in the Theatre Ch. 04'

WOW>>> I want to be Paula so bad. Being able to strut around in such a sexy outfit with only an inch of skirt hiding my hard cock and then being able to grab and rub poor Gary's cock in front of everyone. I cant wait for the next chapter so please hurry. I cant wait to see if Gary gets more than his cock rubbed under the table. I'd love to hear back from you. I'm at sally_spandex69 at yahoo dot com I love to hear from anyone who loves this kind of story as I too am a slut

Typical Tg story. Dress up then cruise for a BJ or trip up the Hershey Highway. Well written but talk about a cliche!

love it

This story is so hot, four chapters in and the sexual tension is almost too much to take. Can't wait to read more.

Wish it was me...

I love the way you slowed down the action, and make the reader feel as tho they are actually there.. wonderful writing.

I enjoy the relatively slow build up of the erotic feelings Paula is feeling. The transformation of her thoughts into becoming a female. I find myself thinking about how sexy that would be. Wow !

Best chapter so far. I thought maybe Paula and Gary might have a mutual jerk-off.

Yes, yes. Finally contact, innuendo, naughty thoughts going wild.