All Comments on 'A Little Bit of Pain'

Well, of course, it's totally fantasy that she could have broken into his house and he would submit to whatever she wanted to do to him. He'd have to be stupid! On the other hand, I'd like this girl to visit my place some time! Interesting story, well done! Welcome to Lit!

Someone comes out of the closet and he just lets himself be pushed onto the bed and bound? Even for fiction that was ludicrous. How about a normal human reaction? Turn on the lights and put up a fight, including picking up the bedside lamp and smashing into onto the invaders head? The writing in this was just bad. I never believed for an instant that he would just allow himself to be assaulted and not fight back. SO bad!

story should be in non-consent.

I Loved it and rated it 5 stars.....one of the best and my fantasy for certain