by LoveTheSun
You leave us hanging again!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. You have given such a fantastic twist on the Vampire story. It is so well written and flows so nicely. I love how you make all the characters seem human even when they are not. This is a romance story in it's truest form. Words alone could not express the wonderment I feel when reading this story.
I was so happy to read more of the story of Caroline. Please keep up the fantastic work. I love the story and the development of the characters. Can't wait until we can all read more.
Hopefully there's more of this,'cos it's just wrong to leave the story unfinished! Please hurry with your next entry! Love the story...:-)
Whew! I am so totally turned on by this story! I really hope you will be posting more chapters so we may know what happens next. Not fair of you to leave us hanging! we might have more of this vampire pair. Thanks for the wonderful read!
come on. i got so much into that story, that i didn't want it to ever stop. hurry up with the next one so we can read it :D
I love the series, please continue. Don't let life's foibles keep you away from something you are so very good at keep up the good writing!
I just finished and can't wait to read more of this story i hope the next chapter is coming soon
great work!!\
-S-
I love your writing!1Your stories flow freely and i cant wait until the next chapters, i am hooked. Great job
aaagghh! nooo... not a cliffhanger! i wanna know what happens! please post the next chapter soon!
I'm a sucker for love stories like this. Hot raw sex and warm sweet emotions mixed in with real threats to the relationship. I can't wait to see what is to become of the two lovers. You made a few hints that I was able to follow and the promise loveliness. Can't wait for the next chapter.
~Kitty~
Wow your story is amazing. I hope you can finish the rest of your story so please do so cuz I want to read more. They are definetly a great couple for each other.
Please write the next part of your story.
It is well written and I love it very much.
I cannot wait for the next chapter.
love it, its different and i like that please let me know wen u have some more
I want to request for the next chapter but......it has been 5 years and I don't think you come here anymore :'(
Unfortunate that this was never finished. Ah well. I understand how life happens. :)
I need to know what happens next!! You do need an editor though. I offer my services, you can contact me at kerrynesbitt@live.com