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Click hereJack was a little surprised to see that keeping such a secret did not paint a mentalist malevolent in his vision. The cartoon dog showed up in the seat next to Jack's. He answered Jack's unspoken question. "You don't consider keeping a secret like that to be evil, so these people aren't presented to you as malevolent."
Jack thought about which of these pot-smoking mentalists was most likely to go to Europe anytime soon. A young man from the Romani woman's society remained on the stage. Jack thought about how to get in touch with the man. The young man's name, Pavel, was projected on the screen behind him, right above his phone number.
Jack's high expired and he left the RV to let Mia fix their bed for them. He took one of the burner phones and dialed Pavel. He slipped into the young man's mind as soon as they spoke over the phone and learned that Pavel was going backpacking across Europe this summer. Jack instilled the desire to visit every concentration camp in the man's mind and also the desire to use his clairvoyance at those locations.
Jack hung up the phone. Before the summer was out, Pavel would be back in New York and Jack would learn if there were rips in the aether over Europe. He looked across the water at the lights of New York. He would love to go to Europe himself and enjoy seeing all the beautiful places with Mia, but he had a duty to attend to. He had mentalists to warn.
He sighed and went back inside the RV.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoYou’ve obviously never been to NYC. There’s no way he drove an RV into the city and parked in the street around the corner from the hotel. The city is too crowded to find street parking and, if by some chance he did, you’ve got alternate day parking in effect which would require he move the RV to the other side of the street on specific days. And there’s no way he parked his RV in the street and didn’t find it stripped to the frame the next day, unless he left his dogs in there… and don’t get me started on the laws against leaving your pets in a vehicle unattended.
Anonymousover 4 years agoKilling me with your wordyness. Tighten it up. Sex scenes way over the top. Tell the story please.
Anonymousover 8 years agomaybe you could make a story disconnected from angst but in the same universe.
my favorite was the last chapter. however, i think his powers were more versatile and complex before. liking the freestyle feel during combat.
that super vamp should have the power to fix his magic and connect it into the new interface. he could re-invent her as a more modern version that serves him.
just some suggestions no pressure.
oh yeah i am liking on this series but his powers seem both very absolute and very useless. perhaps he could sift through the detritus from the experience of that old gypsy. he might find a hidden gem.
and i like the creativity you added to this one in power use.
outsider was powerful in its broad strokes, i would very much like to see more.
especially if it is a little more refined.
now; i have deigned to encourage. feel encouraged.
thank you for inspiring me. kind regards, with baited breath.
sycksyckoover 8 years agoAuthorfor your lovely words of support and appreciation.
The source of my idea for telekinesis was one of Arthur C. Clarke's books on the paranormal, that I read way back when I was a kid. I also saw it on an episode of Angel.
I'm happy people think about my stories and the mechanics of the powers, but I've gotta tell you that the static idea wouldn't work in my story. So long as a person could make out the words being said, they have them in their mind and that's a big target for a mentalist.
Season's greetings!
