All Comments on 'A Long Walk Home Ch. 05'

I am soooo enraptured by this story series. It has so many beautiful elements that I find myself once more bowing down at your skills girl.

This chapter had me in tears! I couldn't stop crying and went through a full box of tissues. Even sent my bro's a big virtual hug LOL!!

The depth and distinction of all the characters in this particular story are so... just so ........... *big sigh*

Thank you so much for sharing this.

But might I request 3 pages next time?..lol I am so pathetic, I know. I was about to goto bed and decided to check and whalaaa...now it is 3:40am here and I have class in the morning but I couldn't resist. I made myself a nice cup of coffee and then WHAM chapter ended. ahhh I get so lost in your stories that I don't realize I am at the end until I read the last line and there is no next page.:-)

outdone yourself with this chapter Jaz, even as i'm typing this the tears are flowing, pls tell me you're still seeking to become published!!!

outdone yourself with this chapter Jaz, even as i'm typing the tears are flowing, pls tell me you're still seeking to become published!!!

I just sat here an cried when I read this...thank you. Lydiasmoon194

*sniffs sniffs* *grabs a tissue* Wonderful chapter Jaz hon, granted it made me cry but they were good tears, can't wait to read next chapter, give me a hollar if you need any proof reading done hon, i'll be happy to help out.

Donna

Thanks for the up date. Out of curiosity how many chapters do you plan for this story? Again thanks for the story and chairing of your talent. Mike from Texas

you've brought all (including me) of your first readers to this instalment to tears. Such a sweet and emotional chapter. A wall can be built for so long that it seems impossible to break, but then a little tap in the right place can bring the whole thing crumbling down. (And maybe that little tap was Freya)

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I need to blow my nose. Great. Truly great. One of your best scenes ever. Action, adrenaline and sex are things a lot of authors can do. But only the very fewest manage to convey such raw emotion with words, that the readers start crying. Good job, Jazz, good job.

...just beautiful. More soon, please Jaz!

B :)x

The awesomeness of the story just keeps getting more and more... awesomer. LOL So awesome that the gauge on the awesome-meter spun all the way to five stars, and then shattered and exploded in an array of flames and glass and shiny things flying everywhere... true story. LOL

Are Kleenex paying you commision because you are increasing their sales every time you post a new chapter! Sniff!

I love this chapter and Alexei with his comment "That's if my mate will release you long enough to let you move." LOL

I can't wait for Caleb and Nor's reaction, it will be one hell of a chapter. The there is Gard when he sees his kitty is back on the res. LOL

This chapter is so full of emotion..I just wished for one more page. Talk about demanding but when it comes to your stories I can't help it! Now, please get busy writing so we can have more of your sexy Dayton soon. Feel much love and general worship.

amazing chapter, 5 stars is an understatement, loving this story

Oh jazz fabulous !!! Really heart breaks some can write down beautifully but there are some emotions which makes your heart react deeply. My heart nearly lodged up in throat with these emotions I cant tell you. Really I got late to read this time but it has shocked me with this marvellous and outstanding new chapter. Please foot stop.

Omkar

Well written and compact, the story moves along, I look forward to more.

had me in tears

I cried too. I am so ready for more.

You really know how to put pull out all the emotional stops. Now all we need to know is what happened to Freya and why she is the way she is. Also Rayne to see her vampire that has her all excited to be at the compound.

what a lovely sweet emotionally charged chapter excellent writing very beautiful chapter can not wait for the next one

What a wonderful way to start the day! A great cup of coffee, another chapter by one of the absolute best authors to be had, sniveling and crying all over the place and a box of tissues destroyed....

What you managed to convey in this chapter is nothing short of sheer genius, you are a MASTER!!! Your adoring fans and followers bow down before you in awe....

We humbly beg ...More....can we please have more????

I don't wanna feel all these emotions at one time. How do you do this?

Written!!

I've said it a million times (so it seems) your ability to bring fictitious characters to life is amazing!

Reading about A and D today..... I felt like I was right there with them..... D's heartache was so real and the warmth, love radiating from A not only brought tears to my eyes but knocked the breath out of me.....

Now lets talk about that scene between A and C..... I have to say that was one of the sexiest things I have read from you! Oh sure the sex is always phenomenal in your stories but A feeding from his mate was so intimate and, and...... Yum!!!

I literally can't wait to read more ;) We already know that F almost went insane when she was changed unwillingly to Vampire... I am hoping you're going to allow us inside that head of hers and now that D has admitted to not only himself but his brother that he has feeling for her this should really get interesting! Damn.... who is going to be chasing who????????

Don't make us wait to long ;)

JazCullen I LOVE YOU!!!!! XxxxxxX

I'm starting to agree with earlier commenters about Rayne possibly being a were/vamp hybrid after she displayed empath-like abilities in this chapter. We saw Liam display that same skill in Ch.3 while he was with his Aunt Freya, so that's a fairly clear foreshadowing if I ever saw one. ;-P

By the way, I'd been meaning to say this but keep forgetting -- the kids are soooo precious! Too often we see stories where the kids are there just for "decoration" but you've really taken the time to add some depth to Lily, Kallum, Liam, and now DJ.

It was really lovely to see Cedar and Alexei together. After five years, those two still sizzle! +1 to @bulltr's comments! *sigh*

I didn't quite expect Dayton to be back 'home' this quickly, but I'm not complaining.

Looking forward to the inevitable fireworks when we return to Freya!

Really great stuff! Keep it going....

I can't believe I'm crying. Well, I guess if it happens I'm not surprized it's from you. GOD I love your work!

cried buckets.

... love the fact that dayton confesses that he enjoyed freyas kiss! oh but the guilt! *sob*

dayton is only now realising his family can help. *sob*

oh jaz... thanks. *sob* ;0)

So Beautifully done yet again another Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious chapter from an amazing woman's mind. Well Done

My absolute favorite writer, you never fail to amaze and satisfy us!

From his fear of Fraya, to his slowly opening up, you have told Dayton's story with dignity. When he finally started to open up and share his problem with Aaron, Aaron was there for him as he had always been. I didn't think him to be weak in any way. I felt for him rather than feeling sorry for him. And when he went to go see Cedar, he knew there was a risk of being attacked by a mean ass Vamp, but he went anyway. And with Cedar he was like a little boy lost. She was able to give him a simple kind of love that he had lacked for so long. Jaz, you just did such a wonderful job on this chapter. The fact that you included one of my favorite twins, well I started out laughing at Alexi and then almost cried with him. And I can't forget Aaron and Jen's triplets, they sound so cute and quite the handful. I don't think we've seen the last of them. Time to cut this off or you'll accuse me of writing my own story with the length of this comment. Looking forward as always to the next chapter!

you have me crying again Jazz. *sob *sob

what a wonderful chapter. :) i can see Dayton's stone heart melting.

keep it coming girl. can't wait for the next one. i will not sleep if you promise the next chapter is on its way. :)

I'm running out of words to describe how much I'm enjoying this series. It has a depth of emotion that really is riveting to read. keep it up! so far personally, I'm team Freya. There is something about her fiery nature that I adore.

Love your work.

LOL! people are looking at me weird, b'cus I'm crying from your beautiful story..I could actually feel Dayton's pain..Cedar's understanding..Aaron's compassion..Thanks for the update Jaz! You're the best!

You are so popular! Hehe! U know I had to read the story on Lit. too. Cried, AGAIN! Thought I'd leave my fav author some luv!

What more can be said that hasn't already been?

I've been left drained by the emotinally charged reunions in this chapter!

I have this knot in pit of my stomach thinking Dayton's reckoning with emotional pain is just beginning, and it's gonna by Freya that damn near breaks him before all is said and done!

I'm on pins and needles, waiting for the next chapter!

I have never written a commet before but I had to this time I have read this whole series all of them and I just love your writting had me crying like a big baby cant wait for more.

ladydelicious30

With the whole Alexander family.They are without doubt the warmest,most compassionate,loving family you could possibly read about. Let us not forget that they are hot,sexy and gorgeous and I really want to be a part of their family. Is Brody available? (wink)

Even the second time through I couldn't do it without shedding tears. There are very few stories I've read that can do that to me, old yeller is one the rest belong to Jazz. This story is so heartfully crafted it almost can't be defined, rather it must be felt. I have said it before and I'll continue to say it, Jazz you are the master of the emotional story. You express them through words as an artist does with paint.

Oddly enough I find myself relating to Day, can't say the exact extent but I get him in more ways than I care to share here. But that's just the point, all of your characters are realistic, I am sure anyone can find one they identify with. And that is what makes a Jazz story so good! Well now it's time to find a new box of tissues.

Great work Jazz keep it up.

As always,

I eagerly await the next chapter

Im saying nothing..no need..everyone else said it first.. XX

Actually got me teary-eyed, LOL (and I usually don't react much like that when reading stories =P)

Question, if this story is 16+ stories, posting once a week, won't it take like 4 months to post? =O

At any rate, keep your chapters coming<3

Can't wait to read more! =D

omg i love your stories!!!

i am addicted, and am constantly checking for the next instalment

and i was not disappointed with this one i loved it

You capture the raw feelings so wonderful in these chapter. I enjoy your stories and look forward to you next posting.

I love all u'r charracters,lovelly story

Heffa you almost made me cry!!!!!Now I know I told you about that hot mess!!!! Then you'll be emailing me talking about how emotional I am and its all your fault!! Your ruthless!!!! Your evil goodness is going to be my down fall I can see it coming!!!! Now hurry with the next chapter!!!!! Your HHIC

I have never cried reading a story but tonite was close. I was very teary eyed. Feelings hit so close to home. My family disintegrated when my Mom passed away. Brother, myself and sisters have not spoken to each other in years. I long for a reunion but am rebuffed at every attempt. This makes me feel empathy for Dayton's emotional state and that of all of his family. I have felt those same feelings. You make it all so real. The emotions you portray are so raw and real. The fear, the compassion, the love, the acceptance - just takes my breath away. Please again, accept my thanks to you for sharing your awesome God given talent with the rest of us. hugs, your faithful fan, Kate

love it, you are a great writer.

I'm not happy with you at the moment. You know that I had to read it again and you know that it made me cry AGAIN!! Lord woman is there anything you can't do???

woww! im new to ur stories & have read all like a hundred times. what about the siochan series? any chance u'll continue the story? many many tganjs

Definitely got me teary eyed!! This chapter was so heart renching, I can't wait for the next one and the healing to begin!!

He took the words right outta my mouth! I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes! It will be interesting to see how they try to "handle" Freya. I guess I shouldn't be shocked at how everyone assumes that she's merely playing with Dayton, that she really feels nothing for him. With the exception of her family, she hasn't really displayed anything but disdain to everyone. But she's deeper than that, and I'm starting to like her.

We've read about Day's revelation, now it's Freya time.

Oh, and can we meet Cedar and Alexei's girls? You know, the ones that are going to make his life a living HELL when they become teenagers?

GREAT chapter.

I'm all teary now hehe

Thanks for posting :)

this is one of the best ever! i love ur stories! keep going!

Damn it Jaz, you've got me shedding tears here. Dayton finally having that break down with his family.... meeting Aaron's kids the way he did. I really like this chapter Jaz, very touching.

-392OhMyGoodness

What a tear jerker! I absolutely loved it! You are such a talented writer! I will be waiting along with everyone else on bated breath for the next chapter!

This story is wonderful i was to tears!

WAY too short *wink* But I loved every second of the read. I still love the dynamic between the wolves and vampires and look forward to Freya's reaction to being told to back off :) hehe Love the reunion scenes. Hoping for a new chapter soon! :)

Great chapter. Perfect bridge to bring Dayton home. The emotions played wonderfully.

i always cry when men cry!..when the problem of freya, i can't decide how much i already don't like her. why didn't dayton tell his aaron that she drank from him???

This one made me cry. Can't wait to see how it all turns out for Dayton and Freya. You convey such emotion in your writing. I hope the next chapter comes out soon.

To short. But loved it. I know Freya is Dayton Mate... Well I hope she will cause I want Day to be happy again and plus that would be so cool.

=o) Please hurry with the next chapter =o)

I love all of your stories, but this one is the best by far!! I never cry, but this one had tears running down my face. You expressed Day's sorrow and devastating loss so well I could feel the pain.... You are an incredible writer! Can't wait for the next chapter, please post soon!

Good to know I wasn't the only one moved to tears of joy.

You moved me to tears!!! That was beautiful, Jaz. Very well done.

Totally teared up on this one -- but loved it!!! Keep 'em comin', Miss Jazz.

wonderful, emotional chapter so much that I don't mind that it was short. Actually glad that nothing else overshadowed Dayton's reunion with his family. Nicely done

that was absolutely beautiful. i was in tears while reading. you amaze me again [; thank you.

Right up there with the best of your stories - how you have interwoven threads and characters from ealier episodes is truly extraordinary.

juli

xx

Unlike other ppl i do mind that it is too short >.< hurry the hell up... Plz? Lol jkes, great work and great ideas. U purposely put the dayton part in The Council just so u could continue the story and dont deny it!!!

Can't wait for the next part! Cried my eyes out it was so good!

Seriously, it's just so brilliant how you convey such emotion in your stories! I get so wrapped up and then the chapter ends....please, please keep these stories going!!

all has been said, greatness is not enough of a superlative to explain

Jaz - I'm sitting here crying! I mean, tears-and-a-runny-nose type crying. This was beautiful and very moving! (My dog is convinced I'm in distress and is trying to cuddle with me. :D) Anyway, you've done a brilliant job as always, and I wait with bated breath for the next chapter!

Well done, this chapter was well worth the wait....and as always, hats off to you....well thought, well written...and the depth of emotions conveyed...am lost for words. Can't it be like a tad looonnnnnggger like 3/4 pages instead of 2????please?

The reunions, the children, my faves Cedar and Alexei. I couldn't have asked for a better chapter. Thanks!

i cant get enough of your stories. i actually have you account bookmarked on my computer!!!! i need more!! lol

Love this chapter like all the others! Wonderful - Thank you so much for giving us all something to look forward to each time a new post arrives. Keep up the exceptional work. I really appreciate it!!

absolutely amazing. you are the best writer here. i love Rayne's character. can't wait for the next chapter!!

From the beginning to now I love it! I can't wait to read more about Freya and Dayton. That ought to be very interesting! Please you can't stop now!

Ok so im late to the party again hahahaha!!!!!!! Ok so am now hooked and waiting thats the part that is driving me crazy hahaha you wrote of all my favorite characters YAY love it CJ

love your story

I'm pretty sure I've said this before in other comments but YOU ARE AMAZING! I adore your stories, I read them over and over and over again and the just get better each time :)

I'm so happy that you're writing Dayton's story! he deserves a happy-ever-after ending :) I hope he gets it

can't wait to read more!!

Not to be the rain on the parade, but I feel like the story is moving too slowly. It has been 5 chapters and only one kiss (if you care to call it that)

I'm not looking for a stroke piece, but honestly, Dayton is getting on my nerves with his closed-off-ed-ness. You're a great writer, so I'll stick it out to the end, but I must say that I'm slightly disappointed about how this is going so far.

...Now that I think more about it, it's probably just you establishing plot and developing characters and my impatient ass just can't deal with it... Anyway, it has the seeds of a phenomenal story and I look forward to ch 6

You made me cry. Loved it the whole time!!!!!!!......LOL

More PLEASE.

This chapter made me cry. Glad that Dayton is bonding with his family again. Hope Freya is ok and will be with Dayton soon.

Your stories are amazing, evocative and powerful and reach deep inside me. I'm a 50 yo male and don't cry easily, yet your story has brought tears to my eyes! I can see that I will not be leaving this go until I have re he'd the last story in the series - at least to where it is to date...

You write such amazing stories and I can tell that this story will be one of my absolute favorites! Anyone who says anything negative can shove it!

Emotional and and amazing. Keep it up!

I just found this tale and you made me cry in the first five chapters. Granted, I am emotional to begin with (as a male, I find this trait extremely hard to deal with publicly). Thanks for making me cry (sarcasm).

You made me cry! This is not the first story on this site to make me a little emotional (I am a guy who is in touch with his emotional side ‘gasp’). However, it is the first story that actually made me tear up. Well done!

look i dont really care about the emotional sap, and married couples and children make me want to vomit. but you write well and hopefully there'll be more sex coming up ;)

I've spent a couple of days reading all of these series... I hope Dayton and Freya and Gard and Rayne wind up together!!!

God dammit i never cry and you nearly just made me bawl

I love your stories!

this chapter totally didn't make me cry at all >.> jk

<3

i cryed !!! bloodly hell woman,you do this all the time,if i havent got a silly grin me face then am crying.your really good to get reactions like that out of people.

couldnt agree more erin. i only cry when a story is truly well written and this is one of very few books that have made me feel for the character enough to cry

definately worth more than 5 stars... unfortunately it doesnt go higher than that

And I'll say it again: You are an evil author!!

I can't remember the last time i laughed, cried, and felt so much all at once. But wait a minute-how could i forget? these people aren't REAL- yet you have drawn me into a world that feels so real! Shows how much talent you posses.

Kudos to you!

So far I've laughed, cheered and cried while reading this story. You have talent!! I'm still wiping away some of my tears as I write this... wonderful story and I'm really looking forward to reading all the rest <3