All Comments on 'A Love Defined Ch. 02'

Nice....like the plot so far keep it going

Great storytelling and character building. I anxiously await the next installment. 5 stars :-D

very good keep on keeping on.

Five.

LOVE IT!

This a great story. I am sooooooo ready for chapter 3.

Is she black or white?

She says she blushes easily with her fair skin and he says that he has always had a thing for black girls, which us which?

Other than that loving the story :)

The girl in the sorry is a light skin/tan/honey colored black woman...

Love the pace of this story instead of just another quickie. Kyla is sweet and Landon is a real gentleman. With Tara in the picture, am looking forward to the ups and downs of this love triangle.

Do all black women in IR relationships/stories have honey/caramel coloured skin with button noses? Any dark chocolate/rich mahogany black women in these relationships/stories? Other than that, like the start. Hope it's a different spin on the usual love triangle.

can anyone ever have happiness in these stories, though I know that Any form of opposition makes a relationship stronger if both parties involved are willing to fight.

Flowing good thus far, I feel that Landon should warn Kyla about him/Tara past discretion's before she finds out.

I like the plot to this. The budding relationship, manipulation and the possibility of retaliation. Something begining so innocently can turn into something possibly volitile or stagnant depending on the direction on this.

The race of Kayla doesn't really mean much, but I must mention, black or african american females range from from light bright to dark chocolate. (this coming from a honey/caramel colored black female) I see majority of the IR stories on here about chocolate females or cocoa colored females, so it is refreshing to see someone who resembles me.

Your story is good so far. You should continue it. It was getting to the interesting part.

This is a very good story! I do agree, please finish it! Im dying to know what happens next! :-)

AWESOME story can't wait to read the rest

I really do find their story captivating, i would love to find out where their love goes. Please continue with this!! <3

The story was able to grab and keep my attention with its robust character development and fluid plot progression. It is just to bad that the story was not continued out to its natural conclusion as it could have been an amazing tale.

please update can't wait for the next chapter

My fault; I should have looked at all of the chapters before reading this story. Why did you, MandiraCarpenter, not complete this story? Just what is wrong with these authors; if you can't finish a story, for heavens sake, don't start them.

My husband and I are in the same type of relationship. It is nice to read an erotic of people that represents us. This is so hard to find. I am hoping you will continue this story and write more.

I realize it's been a while since you've added to this story, but please continue. So far the characters are good and the story line is shaping up nicely.

I realize life happens along the way, but 4yrs; seriously? You should take down the storyline until you are able to complete it.

I wish now I hadn't started the damned thing! FINISH YOU STORIES OR GO POST SOMEWHERE ELSE!!!!

I enjoyed the story but wish I had read the reviews before I started.. Please finish!

This story shows so much potential, please post an update on it!!!

This story has great potential and I can't wait until its finished. I really do not like women like Tara. It is like they do not understand when someone doesn't want them and they go out of their way and end up making a fool out of themselves. Are most supposedly smart women like her that dumb? The story has a great story line and I can't wait until it is finished.