by DenzelNSFW
I like how Jeremy & Maya interact.
The scene when Dean hides his hard on with a pillow is EPIC.
Maya's erotic fantasies were depicted masterfully.
MAYA IS A KEEPER.
I will marry her in my next life. In this life i will settle to reading Literotica stories in general & this series in particular.
Hope this is the only chapter. If it is, sucks to be me.
Made me want to keep reading. I don't think though that it is going to end well for hubby.
Sorry for being a grammar fascist but it should be "your belly is perfect" -- you did sort of ask for that kind of comment. No big deal. "You're" is short for "you are".
interested in where this goes.
and there's always the amusement about anons who are horrified/ angered/ embarrassed/ aroused by cheating wives, or wives allowed to cheat, or husbands who get revenge....
5 Stars for your first very successful attempt. Screw these other assholes who don’t like it. Can’t wait for chapter 3 when Maya and Dean hopefully have actual sex! Please keep writing!
She doesn’t actually cheat. It’s just a fantasy she has while looking at his FB pictures. Really, I thought the banter between the husband & wife was sweet & funny. Only an extremely close & secure couple could joke about stuff like this.
Post this cheating shit where it belongs! LOVING WIVES. Cheating is not in the least bit romantic 1* for your first failed attempt.