All Comments on 'A Man, His Wife, and a Stranger'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Pussy and ass DONT taste delicious, or like candy

Or like any other appellation that most authors use. Prepped well, they can be clean or somewhat musky but if he thinks her ass tastes delicious, then a mouthful of shit would be heaven for him.

Sidney43Sidney43over 6 years ago

Candy, umm no, but then again in the throes of passion ones senses become a bit distorted at times. Pussy, some tastes better than others, but that focuses too much on the small issue in the story.

muncher354muncher354over 6 years ago
Good

Quick hot story. My suggestion would be that when the stranger was coming inside, more detail was needed. Like him opening the door the sound of his footsteps, the wife feeling something hard pushing against her ass and then slipping deep inside. The stranger's size compared to the husband. Etc. Just more detail would be appreciated. Nice work.

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