All Comments on 'A Matter of Life or Death Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Excellent!

wrenchslinger60wrenchslinger60about 9 years ago
Very good!

This was a very good read. I would have liked to see Dave take things a little farther. Or even better would be to have Chelsea start seducing Dave.

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteabout 9 years ago
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Nicely done look forward to the next part......very nice detail. great for a first story...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Supercool

Great story. Hope to read more.

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