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Click hereWe walked again to the master bedroom. As she unpacked her clothes and those that had belonged to Lydia, I helped arrange them in her walk-in-closet. There were probably 50 or more outfits and dresses hanging there already. This shocked Pam and she spent several minutes just gazing at all the wonderful styles and fabrics. Luckily, almost all of them would fit Pam perfectly. Pam loved the large full-length lighted mirror in the closet. Only the shoes would need to find a new home because Pam's foot was longer and narrower than Lydia's.
We showered and were in bed by midnight. While getting into bed, Pam noticed Lydia's photo on the nightstand. That was the first time she had seen her picture.
She picked it up and studied her quietly for a moment before commenting, "Tom, she was beautiful. Look at those eyes and cute dimples. I'm sorry I didn't get to know her. We would have been great friends."
She smiled and we kissed goodnight.
End of Chapter 7 – Stay tuned.
- COMMENTS
Privates1stClassabout 10 years agoI'm loving the character development, the plot, and the dialogue. It's a great story--well told. I've enjoyed it from the first chapter.
Rawmaster50over 10 years agoOh someone had the time and energy to spot grammatical errors, how sweet of them. I was enjoying the story and the recovery and joy both people are experiencing. Yes I am reminded of being a widower, but the promise of better things ahead makes my days easier to endure. Thank you for this story
fanfareover 10 years agoM_E, Unfortunately, most critics who opinionate were missed-educated into learning Academic English. As stultifying and tediously monotonous a method of avoiding human communication as has ever been devised by mankind since Neo-Confuscionism.
None of the multitude of word-processor programs collate well between the authors, the story editors, the site editors, the site schedulers, Operating Systems or the web networks. Even the different versions of the same WP programs do not coordinate well. After all these sloppily coded filters, we the readers are fortunate to receive ANY coherent material.
In addition, the spell-check functions are homophone-phobic. Though, when auto-replace inserts the wrong word into the right context the product can be hilarious.
The whiners fail to comprehend that, anywhere along this concatenation we call the Internet, there are badly coded sub-routines that regularly mess up the posted products. It is a supra-natural event that any of us receive legible writing.
Try reading a letter or other original manuscript, from George Washington or Isaac Newton or any of their contemporaries. None could spell the same word twice on the same page. So fucking what!
Noah Webster was a premature fascist and Thomas Dewey was a proto-nazis, comprehend and then get over it!
These damn sadistic bastard authors, forcing the pitiful readers to have think. What a horrible activity to force upon your enfeebled intellects. Just enjoy the damn stories, already!
Put a bowl of uisge beatha out for the Wee Folk, 'cause sober they are a nasty bunch of sabot's spitefully {spritefully?} messing around with your systems. Passed out, they'll leave you alone to enjoy our technological marvels.
memorable_eventalmost 11 years agoAuthorI am looking for a dependable editor that does have the time and energy to review my stories before I submit them. The help I need is spelling, punctuation, stupid stuff like Anonymous notes below. And I always appreciate story upgrade suggestions during the editing process. Please contact me through my profile page if you would like to volunteer. I only write one story every couple of months so it should not be a huge time consumer for you. Thanks for considering.
memorable_eventalmost 11 years agoAuthorI'm just not perfect for 100,000 words I suppose. As mentioned early on, I didn't use an editor on this one and I did miss a few errors like that. I asked two of the volunteer editors to review it but they never found the time! I also have a few punctuation errors that I overlooked in the earlier chapters. I plead GUILTY, as charged. My brain must autocorrect as I read!
But thanks for reading the story and I apologize for the errors. All 13 chapters are submitted so you might find some others.
