All Comments on 'A Mistress's Blackmailed Slave'

this is a very good story, little grammar mistakes are ther but the story is brilliant, It bored me a little In beginning, but i am feeling glad that i read whole story, it was very nice and well described story. i am waiting for second part.

Story needed editing and grammar and spelling checked. If English isn't your first language then a decent effort, however suggest you find somebody to help with translation and not rely on the likes of Google or Babelfish.

Your storry is good but it is destroyed by poor grammar and spelling.

This has the potential to be a fine story, but it is badly let down by poor grammar, spelling and punctuation. It deserves to be presented in a better way -- you have a brilliant and sexy idea here, but as it stands ...

Please try to get some help with making it the best story it can be and the three stars I have given it will be uprated to a whole five.

Thank you for sharing your writing with us and please keep on writing!

This is in response to the ANONYMOUS comment about poor spelling!!!!!

Anonymous commentor, I do hope you know your mistake in spelling STORY.

Thanks for reading this story actually i am not a native english speaker, but i am trying best to enhance my grammar and writing skills, I am a very imaginative girl, and i promise you all that i will keep writing, and try to better my writing skills, I know if i practice it will become good, and one day i will be a great writter.

This is an interesting story and keeps you reading if you are into Sadism

"She was 5.4 inches tall and 53 in weight."

The blood and that is to much its taking the bdsm much to far needs to be toned down on the blood shed level other then that great a few bits that didnt go together but nothing to bad will she blackmail her mirstress into freedom or so mqny posabilties...