All Comments on 'A Model's Hectic Love Life Ch. 01'

I enjoyed your vidid descriptions of places, settings and scenes, details of Susie's plans for the 'get away'. As a UK citizens it was nice to sink into a story with familiar landmarks. You created a free spirit in the character of Susie while avoiding cliched stereotypes of a women who is confident about her own sensuality. Well done.

Very nicely done!

Thanks for sharing

...but wouldn't a train from Paddington have been more sensible?