All Comments on 'A Most Inconsiderate Man'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Is there a story war in the LW section or something?

First MarkMadden with that bullshit "You're either fine being a sad little cuck jerking it while your whore wife spreads her legs for everybody or else you are an evil, woman hating asshole" story (and like the true cuck he is he disabled comments and rating for the story) and then right below it is this ode to "women who cheat are utterly reprehensible people who deserve no mercy" shit. Another escalation of the WAAC/RAAC vs BTB folks?

SomeOneTwoThreeSomeOneTwoThreeover 6 years ago
Well.

Very extreme.

Sadly I know a woman,

who's very close to being

the wife in this story.

There are just to many

egoists out there, right?

There have been many

extreme stories here

in LW through the years.

I'm not a fan myself,

but writers write what

they want to write.

And that's the way it should be.

Now, the comment about MarkMadden

is interesting.

That's one pissed writer!

Regretably he has a right to be.

Some comment here are absolute trash.

But that's the internet for you.

You get the bad with the good.

MarkMadden should write the stories

he want to write.

He knows now that LW has two kinds

of readers.

The best writers know this and give

a warning before their stories start.

So the readers know, in advance,

if it'll be their kind of story or not.

A wise and considerate thing to do.

MarkMadden should consider that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
@ story war moron commenter

you mean to tell us that all that blustering by the closet cuckold crowd is just a cover for the shame and denial they feel after reading said thousands of cheating wife stories? puuhhh-leeezeee....

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
"give a warning before their stories start. So the readers know, in advance, if it'll be their kind of story or not"

You must be new - that never works on the closet-cases, can find at least 5,000 stories where the author gave a warning and the closet-cucks read and commented anyway.

ReedRichardsReedRichardsover 6 years ago
You were right about one thing:

This belonged in humor/satire.

Impo_64Impo_64over 6 years ago
She is so stupid...

She is so stupid that after the first joke, all the other aren't funny at all...Being so stupid should have been punishment enough for her...2*

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 6 years ago
Thoughts?

Okay, I know this is just a silly-ass story to poke holes in her ILlogic, but I THOUGHT we were working back from her current affair with John to find out how she started cheating, then after her whining about going back to work, etc., she couldn't go out with her husband Friday and Saturday because those are her nights with JOHN? SO, where/when/why did she start cheating?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Stupid AND unfinished

It would have worked better in Humor/Satire. In LW? Meh.

Good story, nonetheless.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow!

Great story. 5

silentsoundsilentsoundover 6 years ago
Definitely humor

Silly short. Somewhat entertaining.

swingerjoeswingerjoeover 6 years ago
Errr, okay

The entire point of the story: women are stupid.

Got it.

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
DOES INCONSIDERATE TOPPLE

naïve and stupid.....TK U MLJ LV NV

TheKrrakTheKrrakover 6 years ago
Funny but good

Gotta love when a cheating skank gets her cumuppance... would have loved to see a little more, at least her reaction when she actually clued in to the situation.

4/5

green117green117over 6 years ago
Humm....

Well, it was a one joke piece, really... the slagging of medical marijuana/BBC/turning out the antiheroine at the end was a second bit, but not really too much additional to the story IMHO...

I'd think that this one would be better if about 1/2-1/3 the length. You want some zing - it felt like beating a dead horse. Perhaps keep the last bit, and take out the middle 1/3rd?

And maybe make it more obvious that it is a satire on the genre? Roger as the protagonist could be... I don't know, Bob? 'Stan'?

Green-something

Ducky7Ducky7over 6 years ago
Loved it

Funny as hell.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
breif amusing read

As for other authors and lw war

MarkMadden is evidently an angry person who bristles when informed not everyone finds personal sexual pleasure from encouraging daughter to be gangbanged next to her mother - one of his submissions

ReedRichards confused me with his CATEGORY comment.

He misplaced his LW submissions as those were hoots and a half.

bruce22bruce22over 6 years ago
Entertaining

Her friend really moved in on her.

gmann57gmann57over 6 years ago

Some people really are that stupid, Just look at liberals

maxx308maxx308over 6 years ago
Found it amusing

She was totally clueless yet thought she knew it all.

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Story War

Obviously people who are annoyed by the neverending deluge of cuckold stories are secretly cuckolds. Just as all anti-black racists are secretly black, and all misogynists are secretly women. On second thought, that doesn't make as much sense as it probably does at first thought to those who make the claim.

Thanks for the story.

Cog

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
a most inconsiderate man

Geez, how many electrons died for this story?

CoffeemuggCoffeemuggover 6 years ago
Refreshing!

That's a refreshing change of pace for LW. Thank you.

26thNC26thNCover 6 years ago
Good one

Satire is a good change of pace.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 6 years ago
@Cog Re: "Story War"

Thanks! GREAT analysis!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Cog the posterboy for closet cuckolds?

How many cheating stories have you read and commented on multiple times, 500, 1000? You might have a ways to go to equal sbrooks or the real hardcore huecucks and betrayeds. Your analogy is piss-poor, let me help you.

Guy goes into diner he hates for lunch and orders food he dislikes then logs into Yelp and leaves nasty reviews, lunch after lunch, review after review, every fucking day, every fucking lunch, month after month, year after year. Get it?

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 6 years ago
@Anonymous Re: Cog

While your point about reading the cuck stories and then complaining about them has some validity, you then extrapolating that those commenters are "closet cucks" is a bridge too far.

Why can't you stick to the story, if you MUST comment on the comments, stick to the issues raised and lay off the personal attacks.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 6 years ago
Nice

Funny tale whatever category it's in.

etchiboyetchiboyabout 4 years ago
This came into your head while collecting butterfly eggs???

Holy Cow! I wonder what would happen if you were running a fever, or took some cough syrup.

4-stars & Favorite (because it’s so original).

jtwheelsjtwheelsalmost 4 years ago
Agree wholeheartedly with etchiboy great story

Dumb slut caught and burned and doesn't have a clue

whateverittakeswhateverittakesover 3 years ago

Clueless and self-absorbed - what a way to live...

AbctoyAbctoyover 2 years ago

Good story once I stepped back and looked at it as a Saturday Night type skit. Kind of like reading an old MAD magazine or other outragously idiotic story (in a humorous way).

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

That was FUN!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The dumb slut struck a match and set fire to her life. LP

MorovarMorovar10 months ago

I actually laughed out loud.

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