by CodeSlinger
First MarkMadden with that bullshit "You're either fine being a sad little cuck jerking it while your whore wife spreads her legs for everybody or else you are an evil, woman hating asshole" story (and like the true cuck he is he disabled comments and rating for the story) and then right below it is this ode to "women who cheat are utterly reprehensible people who deserve no mercy" shit. Another escalation of the WAAC/RAAC vs BTB folks?
Very extreme.
Sadly I know a woman,
who's very close to being
the wife in this story.
There are just to many
egoists out there, right?
There have been many
extreme stories here
in LW through the years.
I'm not a fan myself,
but writers write what
they want to write.
And that's the way it should be.
Now, the comment about MarkMadden
is interesting.
That's one pissed writer!
Regretably he has a right to be.
Some comment here are absolute trash.
But that's the internet for you.
You get the bad with the good.
MarkMadden should write the stories
he want to write.
He knows now that LW has two kinds
of readers.
The best writers know this and give
a warning before their stories start.
So the readers know, in advance,
if it'll be their kind of story or not.
A wise and considerate thing to do.
MarkMadden should consider that.
you mean to tell us that all that blustering by the closet cuckold crowd is just a cover for the shame and denial they feel after reading said thousands of cheating wife stories? puuhhh-leeezeee....
You must be new - that never works on the closet-cases, can find at least 5,000 stories where the author gave a warning and the closet-cucks read and commented anyway.
She is so stupid that after the first joke, all the other aren't funny at all...Being so stupid should have been punishment enough for her...2*
Okay, I know this is just a silly-ass story to poke holes in her ILlogic, but I THOUGHT we were working back from her current affair with John to find out how she started cheating, then after her whining about going back to work, etc., she couldn't go out with her husband Friday and Saturday because those are her nights with JOHN? SO, where/when/why did she start cheating?
It would have worked better in Humor/Satire. In LW? Meh.
Good story, nonetheless.
Gotta love when a cheating skank gets her cumuppance... would have loved to see a little more, at least her reaction when she actually clued in to the situation.
4/5
Well, it was a one joke piece, really... the slagging of medical marijuana/BBC/turning out the antiheroine at the end was a second bit, but not really too much additional to the story IMHO...
I'd think that this one would be better if about 1/2-1/3 the length. You want some zing - it felt like beating a dead horse. Perhaps keep the last bit, and take out the middle 1/3rd?
And maybe make it more obvious that it is a satire on the genre? Roger as the protagonist could be... I don't know, Bob? 'Stan'?
Green-something
As for other authors and lw war
MarkMadden is evidently an angry person who bristles when informed not everyone finds personal sexual pleasure from encouraging daughter to be gangbanged next to her mother - one of his submissions
ReedRichards confused me with his CATEGORY comment.
He misplaced his LW submissions as those were hoots and a half.
She was totally clueless yet thought she knew it all.
Thanks for sharing.
Obviously people who are annoyed by the neverending deluge of cuckold stories are secretly cuckolds. Just as all anti-black racists are secretly black, and all misogynists are secretly women. On second thought, that doesn't make as much sense as it probably does at first thought to those who make the claim.
Thanks for the story.
Cog
How many cheating stories have you read and commented on multiple times, 500, 1000? You might have a ways to go to equal sbrooks or the real hardcore huecucks and betrayeds. Your analogy is piss-poor, let me help you.
Guy goes into diner he hates for lunch and orders food he dislikes then logs into Yelp and leaves nasty reviews, lunch after lunch, review after review, every fucking day, every fucking lunch, month after month, year after year. Get it?
While your point about reading the cuck stories and then complaining about them has some validity, you then extrapolating that those commenters are "closet cucks" is a bridge too far.
Why can't you stick to the story, if you MUST comment on the comments, stick to the issues raised and lay off the personal attacks.
Holy Cow! I wonder what would happen if you were running a fever, or took some cough syrup.
4-stars & Favorite (because it’s so original).
Dumb slut caught and burned and doesn't have a clue
Good story once I stepped back and looked at it as a Saturday Night type skit. Kind of like reading an old MAD magazine or other outragously idiotic story (in a humorous way).