by creativemind831
This is a very detailed and well written story that it is to get lost in. The writer has done and incredible job of making it easy to become involved in the story and take on the role of the character. I very much enjoyed this story and look forward to what is yet to come, Thank you so much for sharing this story with me and for sharing the sensations and desires that the submissive character is given,
I love this story and hope that you write more of it and I do hope that keeps word that don't use her for son seems as of right now he agrees with her that his son needs to work hard please update soon
This is a well written story that just sucks you in to it.
I love this type of writing and story.
Please continue with a series this has a long way to go
with a great start.
A great read. I hope you continue to write as this was an excellent contribution. Eroticism at It's best.
I echo the previous comments. Beautifully written. I love the intensity and genuine care he has taken with her. I truly hope you continue this delicious story
Great writing, keep it up! Can't wait to read the next part of the story!
This is superb writing, I really enjoyed both characters and hiope there's more to cone from these two!
I love how well developed this story was! It was an amazing read and is pretty much what I would love from a dom. You are a great author.
This story is absolutely amazing! It is so well written and really draws in the reader. It's also very intense and filled with raw emotions. I hope you continue writing. Thank you for sharing this!