All Comments on 'A New Adventure'

The way you added both stories an detail was awesome. Well thought out and I look forward to more writings of yours.

Nice images. Good dialogue, except I think you meant "chute" and not "shoot" in reference to Michelle's asshole. Also one instance of "your" when it should have been "you're". Sorry, I don't mean to be picky. Keep writing.

Anon critics: SexyGirl76's stories are descriptive and well, sexy! One can find grammar, spelling, and word usage errors in almost all stories on Literotica. Unless one has a very picky mental filter, SexyGirl writes quite well. I am also a Literotica author and am satisfied after reading much of her library.

Well done S.G.76. Please continue to write and experiment as an author. :-)

That was a great story, really made my day.

In fact I have read a lot of your stories and I really enjoy how well you write them.

I think you mean CHUTE rather than shoot, referring to her rear channel.

Also you're....is proper for you-are. Not your as in "you're so tight".

Liked it though....I love eating pussy and fucking a girls ass.....

Great sex in this story first girl anal virgin hot sex scene. Thanks for sharing.