by DMaster_14
i love this story series, i am addicted to it......i certainly hope that you have not changed your mind about this series, since you already mentioned the possible ending in the first chapter. please make this a very long series. will Kevin and Mina be blessed with a second set of kids or more? will we find out what planet they actually settle on? etc....
i cannot thank you enough for continuing this series ,i thought life got in the way ,i wish you all the best
Another chapter that deserves more than five stars, I could only wish you were able to post chapters at shorter intervals.
Glad you have popped back in with a new chapter. It was a little short for my liking. Because you don't update very often I gave it three stars. There is just no telling if you will finish writing this story or not.
You need a bit of editing on this last chapter - several instances of "thme" among other simple mistakes distract from the intensity as you ramp up the plot.
LibreOffice is free and has a basic spelling & grammar checker.
Thanks for the fun, looking forward to seeing where all of this is leading!
Jason
damn you to hell for making the chapters so short and keeping us in suspense......more,more...we must have more!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE this story!!! Please don't stop it. I'll faithfully follow it to the end.
"Mina's crew displayed the scientific findings of the planet; no life beyond plant based was shown. No microbes in the air, none of the chemical markers that sentient life needed were present."
Easy to fix - "Okay, on three, everyone poop at once! One, two... three! There, this planet is now officially colonized by Earth." It's scientific, trust me.