All Comments on 'A New identity'

Have no ideal what this was. Gave up after first three paragraphs. Like coming into the middle of a conversation

I’m sorry but you’ve lost me as a reader now. In my mind, which of course is only a personal opinion with which others may disagree, you’ve taken the story in a different direction to where it was going after the first two chapters. I did enjoy the story up to this point but with the cross dressing and the Margie character I think I can see the direction you’re headed and it’s not for me.

I enjoyed your story,

It left me wanting more, I also liked how you used teh element of almost suprise with who your charactors are, Please continue

Looked and read okay to me.

Wish my wife would dress me up.

Easypeter

Excellent beginning!