A New Life for Debbie Ch. 01

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Through the door that Abbie had left open in his haste, the screams, whimpers, moans, groans and the squeals of heavily worked springs and beds were filling the silence of the night. The thunders had stopped and the only understandable noises were the desperate pleas of her daughters, encouraging the men who mounted them to further heroic achievements. As she cooled down on the bed, she successively heard her three daughters screaming something like :

- Again!, harder, deeper, Oh my god, fuck me, stretch my ass, fill me with your hot cum!

This house was no more a respectable home for a quite decent family but a whore house in full swing!

(to be continued)

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

i hated it rape does not turn me on i thanks its sick

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
To much sex.

To much sex to early and the guys were way to violent in action and words(calling them sluts) and made them "submit" to fast...

This is not how a Master works.......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Truly an exceptional story

It is obvious that English is not your first language and does take time to 'edit' your writing to the full appreciation of your imagination and story telling can be appreciated. Speaking for all your readers, which I presume is many, please find a strong editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Realism & Wording

Good story, to much thinking. They were all very proper even in their thinking, which generally doesn't happen. You've got four stoogies (bad guys) working for some boss which has a sex slave ring or some such. You don't often get 4 intelligent males doing the grunt work. I stopped reading a third of the way down the first page. Burglars, rapists, kidnappers are NOT polite.

LittleprickLittleprickover 12 years ago
It's too easy

Your story is good and I really liked it but I find they began acting like slut too soon. It would be better if they fought more before caving.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Good Story

I like it. It's obvious that English is not your first language but it's a very enjoyable read. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
nice start

have the humiliation go further by marling debbie and the oldest daughter more permanently, makking them beg to be tattoed as the gangs sex slaves, getting obscene tattooes on tits, ass, cunt and perhaps neck as well

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Hot start

OMG What a great start to what I hope is a long running series. I can't wait to find out what the gang make their new found sluts do, have they got friends who can use the women ?

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