All Comments on 'A New Man'

another asshole with a pen

no story no nothing. so shut up and go back under the stone you came from

Cheating husbands are no better than cheating wives. Bullet to his face.

Oh hum..another low life author.

The marriage is over.

Can't you read dickwad?

Well, Erin is married, and Sweetie MAY have strayed a bit, so LW applies, but this is simply short and weak!

Fun story, could you use a some editing. Not sure if you meant to use present tense (I don't think so) or forgot the past tense, but it makes for difficult reading. Example:

"After a few months of trying to make it work we separate when I got an apartment a mile from the house."

I think you mean "separated". If you just did this once, no problem, but it is repeated several times. Still, I really liked the story and the way you told it. Seemed realistic - at least realistic enough!

Never heard of a square dick before, why did your wife fuck around, sounds more like 4x4 perhaps.

Could get his ass shot off if he fucks the wrong woman, but if he fucks Erin he's safe, since she's a slut to begin with, and besides it's his wife's best girl friend.

It would be some payback for him to tell his ex-wife that he is fucking her best friend.

Was it really cheating what your wife did? I know that if you want to stretch it, yes, just discussing your life with another man is considered cheating. You had a good thing going there, but you didn't finish the story, You didn't even say if Erin went back for more, or what happened with your wife. Just dissapointing to read a story with no ending. If you had a part two coming up, it should have been released along with this one, as many of us will keep reading the next story on the list never to see part two of this story.

Those married women can get you killed if you mess with the wrong one.

1 star and you probably did get shot