All Comments on 'A New Place Ch. 02'

more please ty

aw, come on....it was such a turn on of her topping him roughly when she got excited....u gonna make us wait.........pwease...pwetty pwease...with a cherry on top....;p

I shall wait to see what happens. But if I was Rick, I wouldn't waste time.

I actually like this. Nice work.

This series is weird. I've read a lot of submissions on this domain, and something quixotic but promising, like this, is hard to come by. Such a statement seems to insinuate that my interest in what your mind comes up with is *vast*.

*checks*

Yup! It is! Keep going! Be it on this storyline (with moar sexy tiemz on the horizon?), or a new one, I 'm totally intrigued.

Looks at the dates of the two chapters. I don't think we will see any more because I just think your not active as a writer. I wish you were because the first two chapter got me interested and I was more.

Where is the rest of the series?

I kind of like that she's actually not that nice of a person, making her date compete with some other dude for her on their date is a real cunt move and may very well have contributed to her getting the beating she did.

Not saying she deserved it, but she definitely went out of her way to treat her date like shit even before he obviously found out about her anatomy and snapped.

It's nice to see a bit more moral nuance in these kinds of stories.

I don't believe it - yet another unfinished story.

This is getting beyond annoying !

aaaaaahhhhhhhh! Where's the rest?