by Voboy
Very descriptive and well written. I see possibilities for another chapter or chapters that include confrontations with the characters' significant others.
A good start to what can be a set of stories. The strong female (ROTC can do that) who is an accomplished runner knows how to make this mutual pleasure.
Brilliant story…. And the sex act so well described. As a runner myself I can only dream of experiencing such joy. Do keep writing.
I don't encourage the cheating but it was an excellent read. Very good grammar.
Nice sex! I personally didn't feel the age difference added a lot of value
Excellent story. Very well written. Had me fully engaged. Would love to read more with these two.
Makes me want to take up running, lol. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.