by BusyBadger
Great story, start at the beginning.
The slut/lady duel adds just a touch of humor to a very sexy story. Nice job with great character development.
Still some editing needed (but hell, I do it too, lol)
I really thought her imagination was going to bring Natalie into the house to catch her masturbating, leading to what I believe is going to happen soon anyway.
I hope ;->
Just WOW ! Your writing is so good. I think I gave you one 4 out of 17 chapters. The rest were easy 5’s.
The Lady/Slut thing is incredibly clever and plays prim and proper against hot and sexy. The straight-laced Gwen is starting to lose ground to the hot and horny Gwen, and both she and hubby are benefiting. I love the tempo and her progress. Another easy 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s.