All Comments on 'A New World'

I think this was a really good story! Honestly I wanted more. If there was a book based off of this I'd read it. Nice work. (:

Maybe with some proof reading you would have something here lmao,,,

Not sure what or who wrote this,, sounds like a 6 year old had a major hand in it

( Her body perfectly matched her body. )

( Linda licked her lips and look his cock between her lips. )

Couldnt finish it,, after she look his cock between her lips that was it for me

LLP

Couldve made Linda single its shitty when people step out on their mariage. John and Linda are already shit characters regardless if Linda has a open marriage.