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....the word is SHOCK, not CHOCK. FTFY.

Yes, the other comments are correct about the spelling etc, but keep going. You do have talent.

I suppose I should try to find an editor for part 2-4. :)

A good start but you need an editor to tighten up the prose's and correct the typos but overall a good start and maybe a follow up to this would not go a miss

Nice fantasy story that would be even better without the typos. Sais instead of says, etc.

to be over 18? Very similar to my own teen phantasies.

Liked the story....you need a spell checker (Shocked not Chocked) and an editor to tighten up the story