All Comments on 'A Night in the Cabin'

by PrimePython

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DadDavisDadDavisover 7 years ago
Can I wish?

I am an older guy and your story me wish my first time as like this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
unrealistic

If its so hot, why be using a quilt. Normally a 20 yr old is not lactating unless recently delivering

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sexy Mike

I agree with the lactating comment.

I'd give sexy Mike some chest hair and a treasure trail!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Lactating???

She must have just given birth???

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Perfect

I love stories with lactating virgins, I think it's really sexy. I don't care about realism, sexy is sexy right?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great story, but too short

This is a wonderful romantic story, well written, but too short. A sequel is certainly warranted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Story idea is pretty good; U really need an editor !!

LOTS of errors that an editor could help you clean up!

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