by PrimePython
I am an older guy and your story me wish my first time as like this story.
If its so hot, why be using a quilt. Normally a 20 yr old is not lactating unless recently delivering
I agree with the lactating comment.
I'd give sexy Mike some chest hair and a treasure trail!
I love stories with lactating virgins, I think it's really sexy. I don't care about realism, sexy is sexy right?
This is a wonderful romantic story, well written, but too short. A sequel is certainly warranted.
LOTS of errors that an editor could help you clean up!