All Comments on 'A Night Out'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
You

The word is spelled y-o-u. This is not a text or a tweet. Use fully and correctly spelled words. Rarely can I not finish reading a story, but using 'u' stopped me cold. Please correct and resubmit, asking the moderators to replace the original. Once that is done, by all means, please do continue your story.

Neptune60Neptune60over 7 years ago
Re Y-o-u

I totally agree, it is so off putting, I can put up with the odd typo but not laziness.

nul points

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow.

I read the first 2 letters, and they told me everything I needed to know...

JustaSCOUNDRELJustaSCOUNDRELover 7 years ago

I'll echo the other poster said..

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Bad

It was pretty bad. I tried to give it a chance but it sounds like it's from someone who has never had sex or wrote a proper paper before.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
It could have been better....

Sadly, it was pretty disappointing how you seemed not to care about grammar or spelling at all. It could have been a great story but that spoiled it to be honest.

gentleone58gentleone58over 7 years ago
Not Good and Non-Consensual

I am not sure if it is just me, but not only was the spelling or laziness of the writing bad but was this also non-consensual? This type of writing is in a text, not a story.

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