by Iron_Horseman
I so enjoyed your story, it brings a raw sensuality to my mind. You did a nice job and their non-verbal communication was special; sometimes words are just not needed. I loved the ending sentiment so much.
The story is great, very expressive. Nice to see some development of a story line.
This story seemed familiar, I think because I wished it were me.
I wonder if this woman is a real person or a fantasy for you. Wonderful story...more. Bravo!