All Comments on 'A Painful Lesson'

by Georgib

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RejoyceRejoyceover 10 years ago
Very good!

I enjoyed it immensely!

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
Hmm

I liked the concept of this and particularly liked the way you portrayed the master as caring enough to stop at the right time.

I do suggest you proof it though before submitting.

A good 4/5

sandymonroesandymonroeover 10 years ago

Nice tension! Good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Intrigued . . . .

Your story had pulled me in from the very being, keeping me wanting more. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Refreshing!

Reading a story in which the Master understands the fine line between pushing limits and violating them. Add a submissive who understands the appropriate use of her safe words, and the interaction between them makes them a D/s couple worth knowing......and I hope you choose to let us know them further! Excellent story!

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