by TSpank61
This is very nice, but there's no story here - everyone has problems except for these two. Neither was ever attracted to someone else, neither changed at all during his or her entire life.
Need some conflict here!
You just need a story that is simple and about love. Nice change from some of the drivel here.
For the rest of us who live a less than perfect life.
A picture of what could have.
Some people really do live life's like that I know my grandparents did right up till the day God called them home.
Not a bit of excitement in their lives. No one, but no one lives such a dull life...and appears to enjoy it. Not a wrinkle in 40+ years of being together. Thank goodness the story was only 2 pages long. 2*
To read about a story about how a marriage should be. No cheating, no adultery, no infidelity, no deceit, disrespect and betrayal.
After all the stories about cheating etc. This was a great story.
It was obvious by midway thru the story that this was a tear-jerker,but in more ways than one,I mean to have a star-crossed relationship was almost fate related,to have them be tied to each other it seemed fitting.
Was it ultimately sad or happy,its for you to decide,but for me it felt like it was the latter cause even tho Mom had crossed over in death,Dad had basically been heartbroken and it was fitting that he got to be with Mom in death to be together again.
Yeah it was sad the Son & Daughter lost their Parents but I am sure they knew no matter what it was for the best,cause some have love so deep its like something just rips your heart out that only death can fix it.When I read this my throat got a lump the size of a rock two or three times,but not out of anger but for love,and the author has earned my respect and say this story was one of the best I have read on here.Thank you for writing it.
Need more like it. They were together since they were little kids. This is a wonderful, refreshing story
What a warm and loving tale of two soulmates. I hate sad ending but it was happy and sad all at the same time. Well done 5+++++stars.
A nice break from the usual Literotica tale.
Not only a happily ever after but a sexy story to go with it . A great 5 stars 🌟.
Bill S.
What a golden nugget! Sometimes you need a pure romance. Thank you for sharing a story of life and eternal love.
DP