All Comments on 'A Picnic in the Park'

First I'd like to say congrats on your first story to Lit. Your story seems a perfect fit for this site. And it is a good story overall. What I find myself asking is was really non-human. I know they were cats but other than grabbing a tail, there really wasn't anything to distinguish it from a human couple. Don't get me wrong I still think it was a really good story I just wish there had been more inferences to the fact that they were cats.

Again I congratulate you on your first of hopefully many more submissions.

Thank god some one else used the word Anthro. I am writing a book (normal book) and I couldn't find anyone who used that word to discribe these type of people like the ones in this stroy. You go Forsy!

Though i'm not usually into straight pairings i thought that this one was relatively decent.

To Anonymous:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anthropomorphism

This is very erotic and arousing xD i liked it lol