All Comments on 'A Piece of Candi Ch. 05'

but I think this should be the end. nothing erotic could come out of going on.

<p>But I thought you did a good job of tying up the loose questions. You didn't just add them, but you made them make sense.</p>

<p>But something tells me you have at least <i>one</i> more story in you. You setup a cliffhanger with Doug and Brett's ex-wife. Your character Candi suggested that Bev should watch out for Doug's return. And she blew her off. That sounded like an interesting setup</p>

<p>But I personally can see the development with each story. The only thing I would say, please take it with a grain of salt, you really only have 2 stories here so far. But you've split them into 5 stories. But that is just a personal preference.</p>

<p>Better development. Thanks for posting =)</p>

-Risq

Doug and Bev need more punishment than a divorce. Come on and burn them.