All Comments on 'A Pleasant Visit Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
cant wait

this story has great potential. my dirty mind is already working the 3somes. cant wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
NO INCEST

There is no incest here unless he fucks his brother,we can even marry our first cousin in this country,but thats England for you,we always were ahead of the rest of the tribe?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Huh???

Story definitely had possibilities. Beginning was difficult to figure out gender of person telling the story. Finally when his cousin asked "him" about his love life it became apparent. Really ended up being a voyeuristic story since he just watched his brother "get busy". Not a good incest story.

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