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"Go hard on it," she panted.
I went harder, circling her organ and flicking my tongue over it and settled into a rhythm, my other hand slid down over her lips to her perineum and she writhed beneath my touch as I teased her. Her sighs became deeper, her breathing ragged and her cries harsher, she switched into German after a few minutes and that just turned me on even more. I picked up the pace, sucking and tickling while she kept sliding that dildo in and out, rocking it back and forth to stimulate the front of her passage. When she let go it was with a series of short, sharp cries and her whole body went tense and then she shook violently for a good fifteen seconds or thereabouts before finally going limp.
Renee's eyes flickered open and she exhaled and reaching up, stroked my face.
"For the first time that was fucking magnificent, you have talents you knew nothing about."
It was a night I will always remember. We did it once more that night, a long, slow pleasuring followed by a shower together and then we fell asleep in each other's arms to sleep the sleep of the redeemed.
I ended my long term relationship with Derek the next morning via text message. He wanted to know why and I kind of said, I've found someone else. I didn't tell him who I'd found because to be honest we were never soul mates. I don't know where this is going, I don't know how long it will last, I only know I'm going to enjoy the ride for as long as it lasts. As she told me not so long ago, we're here for a good time not a long time.
- COMMENTS
DreadWriter69696 months agoI love how you describe the seduction and joy in their lovemaking. By the end, I had a nice little puddle collected in my panties.
I'm so looking forward to reading more of your work.
devonlad621over 5 years agoThank you for this story. I love your writing as you mange to put so much emotion into the writing. Your stories are gentle and sensual but highly erotic.
Max05171960almost 6 years agoThis is the first of your stories that I've read, and it certainly won't be the last. Your writing shows that you have more than just skill: You have a heart.
When I finished, I had an itching notion that something about your story was different, unique among the majority of erotic fiction. I went to the beginning to check, scanned to the end, and I was right -- nowhere do your characters mention breast size. There have been too many times when I came across the ubiquitous, " . . . gladly, I thrust my face between her glorious DD breasts," and said to myself, Who does that? What kind of person compares the size of a partner's body parts while making love to them (or just having sex with them) for the first time?
I'm sure the standard answer is that it's a guy thing, but I'm a guy, and I've never thought that. Hell, with the woman I've loved for over 35 years (even though the relationship ended 33 years ago), I don't think I even wondered about the size of her breasts until six-months into our living together. It's not that I think I'm special or exceptional; it's just that I truly appreciate the reality in your writing, and I believe that part of how that comes through is by omission rather than inclusion.
Thanks.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoAnother fine piece of writing. The voice of the narrator is captivating and genuine in conveying her evolving attraction for Renee. Loved the climax of the story, beautifully rendered, so erotic. Thank you from your proud Aussie admirer.
AnyMooseover 6 years agoExcellent story;hopefully you will share more of how Bree & Renee's relationship develops.
