All Comments on 'A Promise to Her Ch. 02'

The story line is right on the money, however i would love to read it and narrate this in the first person. Consider doing that Author. It is inspiring to be able to read such beautiful literature to my partener as though it is really me saying those words of love. Plz consider this for future writings and i will look for it! Definately. Peace.

Really enjoyed this! Your use of language was beautiful!

thank you for your positive feedback, i will continue this story soon.

Tommy