All Comments on 'A Quarantined Boyfriend's Diary'

Don't quit the day job.

Dumb cuck shit. Post it in the fetish category.

I really, really never criticise authors because they put themselves out there but the main character is written as a person with the mental age of a nursery child. This makes the story totally unbelievable. No adult with normal mental development would be this stupid/gullible. Also why is the female splitting up with her former boyfriend when she is so into him. It just doesn't make sense. Sorry but it is not for me.

no need for this trash .

Weird way to write this. Why make the guy out to be so stupid? If you want to write a share the girl story or a cuck story then just do it. Having him be an idiot just weakens the story.

Also, IMO I think this should be in couples and not LW as they are not married.

Actually sex between people who live in different locations has been declared illegal by the British government. So, yeah, we are going to hell, pretty much.

Yes, I know it's not PC to refer to him as such but he is Mentally Retarded. As is the writer if he/she puts more of this crap out.

...story. You should have improved by now....*

Penguin's car isn't running well, smoke coming out of the tailpipe. He drops it off with the mechanic, who says to come back in a hour after he's checked out the problem. Penguin walks around the neighborhood to kill time, decides to have an ice cream cone at the ice cream parlor. Penguins have trouble holding cones with their flippers. Penguin gets back to the garage where the mechanic says, "Looks like you blew a seal." Penguin says, "No, it's just ice cream."

You put more thought and imagination into your pen name than you put into this lame cuckold story.

But it was okay. 3*s

Some people don't get your wacky sense of humor!!! Hilarious! 😂

Add to that the fact that you're in the WRONG category. What made you think a story about a guy's girlfriend and her lover was LOVING WIVES material? It doesn't get any easier than that. Combined with characters that are dumber than rocks and you get

1 star

For the Penguin Joke.. Outstanding.

If your going to write a cuckold story ( i.e. cheating without the cheater getting caught, or being the on the receiving end of revenge) please put a warning at the beginning of your story. You have the right to write what you want, but please give me the option of not reading something that I disagree with. It is too bad FTDS is no longer around - this deserves a rewrite - maybe the cheaters could go catch covid-19 and die, and the clueless boyfriend would end up with the house being paid off from mortgage insurance.

Too ridiculous , even for a far fetched plot

Sorry you wasted the time you could have been cumming into a sock. Better luck next time.

Fun little story. The guy is dumb as fuck but it makes it funny. Keep on keeping on.

Not even a little funny, no imagination, unless writing like a retarded was his goal...Nothing is worst than try to make fun with a retarded character...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

For the insane catagory... where do you upload those?

I feel dumber after trying to read this rubbish.

You are OK writer, and for some dumb reason you go into LW category and start with cuck story.

Let me be prophet for a few seconds:

How many writers who write cuck stories get red score (over 4.5) in LW category?

You don't know... right?

Well, if you take your socks off you would be able to count them all!!!

Liberty, don't mind the haters. I like your weird shit. Please keep writing whatever strikes your fancy.

Keep this shit as personal Jerk Off material.

First off, I enjoyed the story. Very funny given the naivety of the boyfriend. He came off more innocent than ignorant, which is unique for me in cuckold works since the cuck is often aware of the infidelity and are either complicit due to their arousal or helpless due to lacking the faculties to change their situation. In those cases, you either feel pity or annoyance for the cuck (of course with some arousal if it is your thing). I think because the boyfriend was so naive it was funny, which I am not sure if you were going for that. Either way, this was well written as the diction captured the innocence of the bf. I like the interplay of the erotic poetic language, but please know I am trash at poetry so anyone that can make several couplets sound good are OK in my book.

Please ignore the hater comments. Obviously, this story is cuckold given the story tags people! Don't worry about the Loving Wives category. The 'wife' was being loved…just not by her current bf. It be like that. =]

Thank you!

Good try ... but....

Wow, I can't believe the comments from all of the people this didn't work for, but decided to comment anyway for some reason? Sexual kinks come in all flavors, and this one definitely does it for me! Of all of the 2020 Quarantine entries, this one was by far the best! As some of the commenters who didn't like it complained, of COURSE this isn't realistic. That doesn't mean it's not hot as hell for this guy's girlfriend to continue to make excuses for why they can't be together, and continue to tease him from afar while not limiting herself one little bit! I loved everything about this story and wish there were more more more! Thank you to the author! <3

It isn't cuckold if it's not consensual, then it's just cheating. While it was hot at first, it's just sad by the end. No one deserves to have their trust taken advantage of like this. Would have been better if the boyfriend decided he was okay with it or something.

Not sure about this one , she gets stuck at the ex refuses to come home , then stays there longer , kind of lost on the lockdown part and really just became an open cheater