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by dramix91

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BenevolentDCCBenevolentDCCabout 6 years ago
Solid setup.

You have a solid setup for this story. The characters are emerging. However, the sex seemed to me to be almost an after thought; glossed over. This is only one opinion.

PapaMikePapaMikeabout 6 years ago
Another

who spells navel wrong.

anonintexas1999anonintexas1999about 6 years ago
good start

good foundation lay down. maybe too brief of a chapter.

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